I lost my cool at the last part... it actually made me laugh in disbelief. What a bitch.

Holy crap, Mari is vile.

I have greatly enjoyed this story so far and I hope you come back to it soon. Tha t being said, I wish you luck with your book.

I HATE Hakwe, dayum!

I just found this, it is intriguing.

Daaaaang this story is awesome. Mari was one of the most evil creations I had ever read about and you handle the personality change wonderfully. Mira is so kind and sweet it breaks my heart when she is learning about the things she has done. I love, love, love this and I plan on reading the whole story :D

""I didn't break my promise. My magic didn't kill him," she whispered, hiding her pain beneath a soft smile." - Love how you got around the Arishok duel problem! This chapter was wonderfully written. You should be proud of it. :)

So sad to hear that this is being put on hold. :( It's so awesome! I hope you do decide to continue it - but this is a good spot to pause, I think. I'll be eagerly awaiting more (whenever it comes)! :D

I was happy that there was a new chapter. I read it off my phone while I was in class. Thankfully the professor didn't notice. At least I don't think he noticed. Anyway now that Qunari are taken care of and not longer a problem it's time for Meredith to step up and take their place. I'm glad people are so afraid of Hawke anymore but I have a feeling it will take a little while longer before they completely trust her. I can't wait to read more! :D

Updated! Oh I'm so happy to hear from you my dear - and such a wonderful chapter! Hugs xxx

An excellent chapter, the battle between Mira and the Arishok was well done, and the romance was perfect.

Don't have to worry, I completely understand about it. Though, I can't deny it. . . I can't wait for more *squee*, loved this chapter! :)

I was happy to see this update, but I understand that life comes first so I can be patient for new chapters

Awww! I'm so happy that you're continuing the story! I really do hope that things improve for you! :3

"If ever he should have a daughter, Anders vowed that he would never neglect her so." - that bit of this chapter made me smile. That sounds perfectly like Anders. He would be a good father. :)

I like the progression in both the dynamic between the characters and the time-line in this chapter. The Qunari Attack is fast approaching, and I look forward to reading how Mira handles that problem. Keep up the awesome work! :D

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter! :D

Always a joy to read! Hugs for an amazing author! xxx