Finally! And well done!

Loved seeing the hidden confidence. Often the best stories let us see past the facades. Congrats and thanks for a really good story!

Aw so sweet!

Haha perfect for these two!

Gorgeous!

Loved this!

Love these scenes!

You have a gift. I hope you're writing somewhere for yourself, somebody or something. Very impressed.

This fanfic is so good, like I acutally think all this happend like this author was a writer for that show.
When I see them look at eachother on the Bridge in the show, Im like I know what you did last Saturday.

I love your writing. My favorite line: "They were not interested in her complex emotions." The stars. I wish the series had followed your script. I'm amazed by your ingenuity. This is superb.

Tea and cakes, yum! And YUM to this series. In general I love the Malcolm/Hoshi dynamic, and you've portrayed it very well here. I even love (hate) the ups and downs of their relationship.
You set yourself quite a challenge with this, and I'd say you nailed it!

I read through the whole thing in one day.
I think I need help.

This is very funny, but didn't Archer recognize Mal *because* of his eyes? If I'm remembering right, we could still see Dominic's beautiful grey-blues.

I agree with the other reviewers - would love to see how you would continue this!

I don't understand why Trip is so upset in this scene, but otherwise a very good job.