please update soon, love this story

This is an amazing story. I can’t wait for the update.

Her name is so close to Jeanine Matthews from the Divergent series, lol.

Hey hey! Really love this story. Are you going to update soon?

Bros before Hoes and Sisters before Misters.

(sings from the rooftops) THIS STORY IS AMAAAAAAZING!
That is all.
AxM

Love, love, love it! Please update again. The suspense is killing me.

OMMGGGG

So, I stumbled on this fanfic today, and already I can't live without , I exaggerated a little. I wont die. BUT! I will probably live in misery if I don't see this masterpiece completed.
A good fanfic is hard to find. As rare as gold and hard to hold. Seriously, this is the first great Bumblebee story I've come across that doesn't involve a pairing with another bot. (Not that that is a bad thing.)
I have read all five chapters in one sitting, my but is numb, and I am addicted big time. Please write more! I need my Bumblebee fix!

Guah. This is fantastic. I'm just sitting here after reading that making breathy noises because it was written well enough for the rise and fall and rise of emotions in this chapter to just hit me and I...Huaaah! And the way you wrote their attraction to each other made me actually get shivers and feel so excited!
So, I'm going to be honest here. I tend to go out and read, what is easily labelled as "bad fanfiction" for fun. It gives me an idea of what not to do in my own writing and reminds me of my own terrible works. (Which I plan to post on the internet some day. The cringe I'd too strong to not share!) And, if I'm embarrassingly honest here, I came across this fanfiction looking for just that. I wasn't out looking for a genuinely good Bumblebee X OC story. In fact I found the idea hilarious, and impossible to do well. You have proven me wrong. I started reading this about two years ago and I've been saving it in my bookmarks and checking on it every once in a while since. I haven't exactly made an account, and I'm afraid I don't intend to any time soon, but if I did I think this would be the only fanfiction I would review, seeing as I don't do this often. Keep this up, please! For once I'm enjoying being proved wrong. ;)

so good can't wait for the next update

I love! LOVE LOVE LOVE! You must continue this beautiful piece of art that you have been writing, I mean it's just so addictive I want to read more and more and so much more! I do hope you continue it though but take your time I'm not rushing you although I would like another chapter sooner rather than later...,

I'm a fan of your stories! For a while now, one-two years? You're one of my all time favourite authors as well. I started with the hunt begins, then the hunt continues and out of curiosity I decided to explore your other fics!
So far Jeanie's one of your best oc's so far. I think it's because of her humble nature. I enjoyed this short fic immensely but I noticed it's been on hiatus for a while I suppose. Also I like her description as a more curvy girl, a lot of OC's ive read who's personality ive liked are always in the same category, slim, tall and fair eyed. I think she's a refreshing change and her more womanly figure beautifully contrast her shy, and sheltered character. After all, all shapes are beautiful! A main character can have assets and not be a slag as is the case in other fics *eyeroll*

What I enjoyed from your previous fics with heriones like Eli, you always give them an inverogating transformation (they mature into strong women, with great determination, an admirable will.) Which is a facet of your fics which is refreshing. I can't wait to see little sJeanie's development!

Jake reminds me of a chilhood bully of mine. They often suffer through the abuse and become destructive because of it, even if he "likes" someone the way they often harm that person and justify as deserving. You can't blame though their social interactions become distorted and hurtful.

As for the fluff in this chapter I can see why she kissed bee (in her mind a stranger) because he's new and exciting, a thrill in her otherwise quiet life, a mysterious handsomse boy who rescued her? In the heat of the moment I can see her acting impulsively.
Albeit due to her same introverted nature she will probably rationalise the situation quicker than most girls, in other words ask him to slow the eff down . XD

She seems liks the type to fall for the best friend and I think you should play on that as an alternative instead of the falling for the stranger then waat, ohnoes it was you Bee the whole time?! Cliche.

Id think ot would be more challenging on setting Bee being upfront quickly on his holoform, it give you a wild card on how she'll react and after THAT do we start the complications of falling for an alien species, haha.

Bee's perspective is also something I enjoy especially with his mischievous nature and slight possessiveness.
Im sorry for rambling! Im just so excited to see what you' ll do with this fic. I can see your slowly getting more detailed with the chapters and adding more subplots! Looking forward for the updates ma'm!

I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more!

I love this! is so different but good different