This was a good explanation of their true beginning. I still like the life series and I guess I am spoiled knowing what they have in that series. But anyway I am on a quest to read all of the rest of them and then I will send you another note.

I wish Tony had gone to Israel with Ziva. This was just beautiful. Thank you for writing it.

I just realized you wrote this before Shiva aired. You're thoughts are uncanny!

This is so good, better than the episode in my opinion.

I wish this is what happened in the episode. It bothered me that no one was with Ziva after her father was killed and they were all at the hospital

Is this person for real? You must have a real hate-on for Darstar. Again, I'm not sure who appointed you as her personal editor, but you are way over the top here. For Darstar: another great chapter. Don't pay any attention to this person. She may be a "grammar teacher" but she is not very professional in my opinion.

Okay, I know you're not American, but this series is set in America. It's not ED (British Emergency Department), but Emergency Room...ER. Thi is set in America. If you have concerns, PM me.

I like Ziva in this more than in the real episode!

This made me cry. Wish Tony had really gone to Israel with Ziva!

Thank you for a great story.

I loved it.

Not too many reviews? Wow, need to look at your other stories. So far these are good but only the first one really means anything to me because the rest of this is conjecture. I'll read the others and I'll watch NCIS tomorrow night but my favorite missing scenes so far were written by thebigianthead.

This was so awesome. Now we just have to wait to see the end of this nailbiter!

yeeesss! thank you for this beautiful story

Oh GOSHHH-wonderful amazing job! The end of this chapter really got to me!