Reviews for Azrial: The Beginning
psychoblackcat chapter 6 . 10/7/2018
ono more?
Christian chapter 6 . 5/8/2018
Its been too long :( I just reread your series and it makes me sad seeing that you haven't updated in a lonngggg time. I have so many questions, please come back :'(
Christian chapter 6 . 5/8/2018
Its been too long :( I just reread your whole series and it makes me sad seeing how you haven't updated in a lonngggg time. I have so many questions, please come back :'(
The-Lucid-Dreaming chapter 6 . 11/10/2017
So like.. why didnt they take them to the nightosphear?.. also i miss you ;_; when are you coming back..
Guest chapter 6 . 1/4/2016
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
pressthespacebar chapter 5 . 1/14/2015
Hey dude. Um... Cool story! I like how you always describe emotions so well! Seriously! I wish I could do that... BTW I'm only 11 so I guess my fanfic a totally suck... Anyway can you tell me what you think of MINECRAFT?
ethan chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
The end come on please make more I love this series
deaths1slayer chapter 6 . 11/9/2014
Dude like come on not leah me hearts broke and plus when are you makeing another chapter its been waaaay to long
P.S I'M A HUGE FAN YOU RULE KEEP UP GOOD WORK
Guest chapter 6 . 8/15/2014
Anytime now... ?
Guest chapter 6 . 8/2/2014
Where is it?
Donosaurus chapter 6 . 6/14/2014
PLEASE dont let this de I just finished unholy last night and finished this to DONT LET IT DIE MAN I LOVE IT TOO MUCH
Guest chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
Please continue! I NEED THISNTI HAOOENHDUNXJEJDKDKEKXKEKX
prince of darkness and fire chapter 6 . 3/18/2014
Read the trilogy twice now :((( last updated june last year! Continue asap! Its amazing and i live it and im sure loads of people do! Crowd pleaser continue! Sad what happened to leah though :( but please do continue i hate to see storys that are so good un finished :( well done tho!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
Wow, almost 200 reviews and its not yet finished. Finish this story if you can, its too perfect to be left like this
BarefootDreads chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
Alicia your work is incredible! i have read many fanfictions that center around different characters, such as Fairy Tail, Naruto, and Adventure Time. Out of all the ones i read, there is always one couple that always sticks out to me as my favorite, and usually its the one that is hinted, but never shown. that is the same case here in Adventure Time with Finn and Marceline. I have to applaud you, as many fan fiction writers can create characters or cause their characters to go way OOC, yours are the perfect balance of being both in character that we have seen, and anything considerably OOC is not so far out that it is unbelievable. I would really like to encourage you to try and finish this story, as you have a beautiful beginning, a great middle, and now the beginnings of a wonderful, heart-warming story that anyone who watches Adventure Time can appreciate. I sure hope you haven't lost your spark for this couple or the knack to write so beautifully, and whatever you decide to come out with, I'm sure that all of us that read your fan fictions will fully support them :) blessings girl you truly have a talent, especially if you can get me as a reader to laugh out loud reading the chapters as I view their hilarious behavior and smile at the heart-warnings moments you write. continue to share your gift with the world because it a gift that will continue to blossom :) BarefootDreadsAlicia your work is incredible! i have read many fanfictions that center around different characters, such as Fairy Tail, Naruto, and Adventure Time. Out of all the ones i read, there is always one couple that always sticks out to me as my favorite, and usually its the one that is hinted, but never shown. that is the same case here in Adventure Time with Finn and Marceline. I have to applaud you, as many fan fiction writers can create characters or cause their characters to go way OOC, yours are the perfect balance of being both in character that we have seen, and anything considerably OOC is not so far out that it is unbelievable. I would really like to encourage you to try and finish this story, as you have a beautiful beginning, a great middle, and now the beginnings of a wonderful, heart-warming story that anyone who watches Adventure Time can appreciate. I sure hope you haven't lost your spark for this couple or the knack to write so beautifully, and whatever you decide to come out with, I'm sure that all of us that read your fan fictions will fully support them :) blessings girl you truly have a talent, especially if you can get me as a reader to laugh out loud reading the chapters as I view their hilarious behavior and smile at the heart-warnings moments you write. continue to share your gift with the world because it a gift that will continue to blossom :) BarefootDreads
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