Reviews for The Sun And The Moon
Mistress Saturn1 chapter 49 . 11/30/2018
Has this been abandoned?
Last Breath chapter 16 . 8/20/2016
Sesshomaru you dog! You are not supposed to be a hentai!
Shi No Mo No Tenshi chapter 11 . 6/17/2016
lol 'dangor' XD best word I have never heard about so far in my life

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Darknessdawns chapter 49 . 11/16/2015
This story seems rather interesting and I do hope you rewrite it. I would like to see how it ends.
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 18 . 12/29/2014
I like the story, but I find the chapters way too short. lol but good job. Will you try to make the chapters longer?
Vocaloid Marmalade86 chapter 35 . 8/13/2014
I know I'm pretty much late with this but the actual lyric for the song Still Doll is:

Because the heat of
my words-weaving tongue
has completely subsided,
I can no longer
sing any of the songs
that I like.

Hi Miss Alice,
with your eyes of glass,
what kind of dreams
are you able to see?
Are you being drawn to them?

Once again,
my heart has become cracked
and started bleeding.
I've tried to patch it up,
but pieces of my memory keep
sticking into the crevices.

Hi Miss Alice,
with your fruit-like lips,
to whom are you
hurling your love?
Are you sighing because of it?

Because the heat of
my words-weaving tongue
has completely subsided,
I can no longer
sing any of the songs
that I like.

Still, you do not answer
Still, you do not answer...

I know how you feel, I also thought those were the true lyrics until I learned that it wasn't. I love the chapter although I kind of feel that they are kind of moving too fast with things, especially with the taking of her virginity. That should have waited a few chapters after Sesshy learned of her being a virgin BUT...this is your story. I will not tell you what you should do with it, I know how annoying and frustrating is to have someone tell you what you should do with your story that you put a lot of thought into. Also sorry for this long review if you mind long reviews. Once again, I love it and I'm not sure if you have realized it but you have many spelling errors. Most of the time I can understand but there are some few times that I can't. But once more I love the chapter and the story.
Hugabouv chapter 49 . 8/13/2014
your too hard on yourself... :)
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 49 . 8/11/2014
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 4 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Okay
anburukia chapter 49 . 8/10/2014
And here i was so intrigue with the story
inukag94 chapter 49 . 8/10/2014
Omg! You left me on a damn cliffy!
Relina16 chapter 48 . 7/21/2014
Please continue the story it is really good
SayonaraKuroi chapter 48 . 6/7/2014
UPDATE!
Under The Masks chapter 48 . 2/14/2014
Y u no update?! D: I'm hooked on this story and just barely hanging on. Please, oh please, update!
briana chapter 48 . 1/27/2014
this story... WAS AMAZING! i was flipping out, when inuyasha took her! im sad that there is no more chapters that is continuing the story, at least so far.
but thank you for writing an incredible story like this.
Guest chapter 48 . 8/20/2013
Please update soon I love your story
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