Wow, it's like you were there...I like this story, Revy could so much more sensual that the anime let's on.

Wow you got a real talent for this, incredibly well written and enjoyable.

Amazing... I'm in awe. It was excellent.

You sir, are a mad genius. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. You description of the setting, of Revy, and Rock's feelings were nothing short of masterful.

I've only recently started watching Black Lagoon and I can say without a doubt its everything I've ever wanted in an anime. And you captured all that in your story. The tension (sexual or not), the awesomeness of the characters, and a great ending.

Well done, my friend. Keep up the good work.

I enjoyed this and oddly enough I can see an alternative ending.

He broke, he knew he would die but could not help himself. He stepped up behind her and began to trace her curves with his finger tips as he had just imagined. She froze and turned her head to look over her shoulder at him.
"Did you finally get brave?" she asked in a husky voice.
"Maybe I finally went insane." he replied as he gripped her waist and pulled her body against his.
"Bout damn time..." she murmured with a smirk on her face as she turned towards him and leaned close to his lips.

Man, how my mind works some mornings! LOL!

Nice, you should do one where the Lagoon Company observes Rock.

OMG, it's a songfic that doesn't make me cringe. I think I like you!

Some minute errors in grammar, but nothing that made the meaning unclear.

You hit upon some of the themes of BL that I touch in my stuff- specifically, the way the women in Roanapur are like forces of nature, all awe-inspiring and absolutely terrifying.

SHIT...That was intense. I LOVE your WORK. Wow!