I really do hope this gets updated again some time, this is my fourth time reading it through. I REALLY want to see how Louise reacts to the fact that his Grandmother was the First Seraph, his 'Aunt' is one of the Six Ancestors who created monsterkind as it is now, and that his mother and father were the ones to tear down Ilias and technically kill god. This story definitely has some great potential, would be a shame to just let it sit.

Canonically, ONLY the Sylph of FoZ was killed by Brimir...

Great to see this wonderful story back!

I dislike Mott and everything connected with it. So much attention is paid to it that it becomes bad. The story was beautiful until this damned Mott appeared with all that concerned him. Perhaps if it was a different character with a different background, I would take everything better, but the truth is that Mott whose bastard needs at least to bury alive, and as a maximum dissolve in acid and this is an axiom. Attempt to make it good personally, I was caused by a wild rejection and rejection. So strong that it becomes unpleasant for me to read further. Again, it is possible if you began to show the truth before, the impressions would be different, but at the moment it all looks like an incredibly miserable and unfamiliar approaching a disgusting joke.
How is that? Why did you do that? The story was generally quite positive and good, but Mott simply spoiled everything, and the main character turned from a rather intelligent rational to some kind of amoeba that could not do what was necessary to achieve her own goals. Is he a half-monster or did he go out for a walk?

* Google translation from Russian to English *

A sword used to... ... seriously, thats ...

What Fish on Land said. Happy Halloween, friend.

I've been following this for a while, but this will be my first review. I enjoyed this story. I'm a fan of both settings and you've blended them together effectively. I like your version of the MGQ backstory: it portrays both the monster and angel sides as having both good and bad points, and it's inspired by canon while being a fresh take on it.

I hope that this is continued eventually. I also think that this story should be rated T, as there's nothing so far that would merit its current M rating.

Really hope this is continued one day

Um. Wow, I feel way more sympathy for Illias than Alice I, honestly. Sounds like Illias would have been relatively content with the status quo if monsters hadn't started attacking her creations.

I'm guessing that she put all of her redeeming characteristics into her Seraphs though. That was her mistake.

I hope this story isn't abandoned.

Im not sure if this fic is deserving of an M rating really...id say T at most.

Dead Fic? :(

Count Mont being so involved kind of killed me wanting to read this.

To be honest this isn't what i expected when i picked up this story; you can play around with intrigue and politics quite a lot and surprisingly the characters are well made. If i have to point out what could be better it would probably involve how you seem to switch the POV to cover details that are redundant and you seem to be quite verbose at times.

You don't ever impose that sort of idiotic tradition on getting a male's copulatory rights. Males are easily replaceable by other males. Females are not nearly as replaceable. That's why you hear so much about challenging for a female's hand but almost never for a male's.

This is doubly true of a male who isn't going to be emperor due to the enatic inheritance of the family.

I look forward to Alex realizing many, many years later that he's still alone (or even perhaps an actual virgin?) because the line of inheritance has long since passed him by and there are lots of males who are more accessible. The few females who regularly come challenge him would be there purely for the challenge and for the fun of a good spar.

Also, the females more capable of bearing sons would be natural-selected for by a monumental amount due to having a huge advantage in passing on their genes, but we can handwave that in-setting by claiming that there's some genophage-like thing in effect that kills male embryos more effectively.

Men, you really need play paradox.