Thank you for the lovely story. I really enjoyed it! Much appreciated!

I like it. Catch ya on the flip side.

Wow, this was VERY good. I've seen this episode and was glad when Tom didn't get hurt. But your version is a very well-written alternate. Excellent work!

The story is amazing. Beautifully written, interesting take on the episode. I haven't seen the episode in question yet (I'm still on season 2), but I can imagine how it all went through. Poor Tommy boy. I wanna give him a big, warm, tight hug!

I love Tom and Doug's relationship. Real brotherly feel.

Good story! Really enjoyed it. :)

Good thing they got to Tommy in time. And the ending seemed just right. Tommy is OK. And he talked to Doug. And Harvey was caught.

Well done! I really enjoyed the whole story. Thanks for sharing.

Argh! This is getting so good but I haven't got time tonight to read anymore. I'll be back tomorrow to finish it :)

Just finished the first chapter and LOVED it! Am moving on to chapter 2 with bated breath :)

I actually had pretty much this exact plot bunny hopping about in my head since I've seen the episode! I don't know if I would ever had written it down as coherently and nicely as you have, so thank you :) And as far as endings go, it really wasn't that bad.

Ohmigod, poor Hanson. Y'know, I was kinda wondering something along the same lines myself. Glad to see there's a fic about it. Anyway . . . *favorites* *keeps reading*

Hey, just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed your ending. I think you really wrapped things up nicely. You didn't go overboard on the emotionalism which is really good, because that wouldn't be characteristic of those two. As for finding an ending. I know how difficult that can be. I finally ended one of my stories, took me 3 months to get the last chapter out and then post it. I think your ending was perfect. I like the last line. It summed it all up. Keep up the good work. By the way, sorry I didn't sign in. It's late and I didn't feel like jumping through the hoops. Candee

Your story was great. I checked every day for more chapters. Next time, I'll try to be more diligent about reviewing. Sorry you got discouraged.

Don't worry, all your fic is fantastic. Thank you very much for finishing.

Great story. Love the teddy bear, that was cute. I also have problems with endings, but I personally think it turned out pretty good.
Sorry, I didn't review the previous chapter. Guess my anticipation for the final chapter was too great.
And before I forget (again) I want to let you know how much Ioved "Tribulation" and "Guardian."

T. F. Crosby