this was so great!

Great story. It was sweet her and Juice. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing.

I like how she checks in on the kids.

I love that he moved in! I think this was a very fresh take on juice's origin. I really liked it & Emmy.

Oh so sad, I was hopeful for a better end for Donna.

I like that she told Clay the truth.

I like that she's worried about Donna. I hope it all goes down different.

I like what she said to Ellie. I'd love it if Donna didn't die.

Awe, I love their talk, so sweet.

I don't understand how she couldn't of hired a PI or something to find him if she knew he was in the MC.

I like what juice told Chibs about being with her since he was 15.

I like that he tells Half Sack that he has a girl.

I love that he just showed up again, & she woke up in just her boots, lol. I love why he had stayed away, though I wish that he would've given her the choice.

I like that he helped her dump her dad, then got her out safely & then took the wrap for stealing the car to protect her. Did they stop talking because he was incarcerated?

Poor girl, I like that Juice was there for her & was so sweet & caring in this horrible situation.

Poor girl had a horrible childhood with a father who did unspeakable things to her. I wonder why she & juice drifted apart.

I wish they had more time to talk about the past when they woke up.

I wonder what "ally has good taste means?" She has a thing for Jax?

I wish there were some kind of dividers to show where scenes end/begin. It gets a bit confusing.

Great chapter! I love the backstory & their origin. I like that he went to her place, found her in his old tshirt, & kissed her.