I don't know why people add yui into harems when her personality is nothing special. Her attitude towards discipline and order are so oppressive. That in any logical situation people would resent her and rise up.

This would probably be better if you didn't have Naruto acting like an angry Rito when it comes to Lala. I love the To Love Ru series, but Rito's antics got annoying after the first five episodes.

Consistency is a synonym of redundant.

Also, The Walking Dead sucks. The comic is somewhat tolerable, but the show is absolutely horrible. I thought the Resident Evil and George Romero movies were bad enough, and then BAM, here's The Walking Dead. That's ignoring the outlandish ideas like a black woman with no training wielding a Nodachi (that's a Nodachi she's wielding, not a Katana. Too long to be a Katana). And wielding a Japanese sword takes a lot of strength and finesse, they're heavier than European swords.

Don't diss Ikkitousen, Ikkitousen's only fault was killing off Ryofu Housen and Chinkyuu Koudai, other than that, it was a great translation of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, better than that Koihime Musou garbage.

However I do agree, To Love Ru had great humor and in reality, the fan-service went with the humor, especially the English dub version of season 1 which is sadly the ONLY season dubbed, because the dialogue in the dub is freaking HILARIOUS compared to the sub, not to mention the English dub had some AWESOME voice actresses, especially Lala and Mikan's.

As for the nudity... seriously? Why do people demonize an anime or manga because of fan-service yet glorify the ones with pointless gratuitous violence and bloodshed (cough* Akame ga Kill cough*). It's kind of disturbing when an anime where characters are butchered for no apparent reason (cough* Akame ga Kill cough* Fate/Stay cough* Tokyo Ghoul cough*) are highly acclaimed and stories with some good slapstick comedy with fan-service are demonized, tells you what kind of world we live in and WTF is wrong with it. Seriously, thanks to those series I judge whether or not I watch an anime by going to the wiki and checking the cast's status, if I scroll down and see (dead dead dead dead alive dead dead dead), I don't watch it. If I wanted cliche, I'd watch American horror stories.

As for Yui... yes... Yui's cute, but I honestly don't see why the entire fandom is obsessed with her. There's nothing special about her. My favorites are Mikan, Yami, and Momo. (Not as protagonist love interests but simply as characters). The first two because their reactions are hilarious, particularly Mikan. Her walking into Rito's room, seeing a naked Lala, then calmly closing the door before shouting 'I'm telling' is what made me instantly like the show. Momo, her twisted personality is what makes her awesome going from seducing Rito in the mornings to playing Miss Prim and Proper in school to threatening intergalactic assassins with a Mirai Nikki expression on her face is just awesome!

Главный герой тормоз и дебил позволяющий издеваться над собой всем подряд. Автор, дай ему хоть каплю самоуважения.

Great job

For last chapter cause I wasn’t able to post a second review..
Harboring an illegal alien life form? When is the princess of the largest empire illegal on a small planet? They recognize the guy who attacked him as royalty but not the princess? Wtf stupid is this cause this is just way ass backwards.

How is he illegal? It was stated multiple times that he was born and raised by his mother till he was 3 were he was then taken away. So that means he is actually native to earth.

Its to bad this is a over, but I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for the wonderful time you gave me with this fic! *bows forward* have a wonderful Christmas!

Illegal immigration? Bitch, Naruto's half earthling, he has a hereditary right to live on this planet... And even if he didn't, what the fuck were they doing for the last decade? Also, didn't the so called royal also enter illegally? What about the fact that he was trying to hurt some humans? What about the other illegal alien that's currently living and going to the same school as the blond? No actions are being taken against them? Yeah, the whole thing smells fishy and it ain't the fish.

this is a new level of cooking skills. burn water then the pan haha.

I read this story from beginning to end, and in some places it had bad moments, but I want to say that I really liked this story. I understand your reason to finish it. I myself really look forward to continuing your other stories. But I hope that someday you will return to this story with a naive stranger, a strict member of the disciplinary squad and blond kitsune who is always looking for problems.) Good luck with your other work author-sama, Ja ne)

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Story wasn't that good

Sad to see this one end so abruptly but to be honest, I didn't like the execution. The idea is a money one and extremely interesting one at the start. The problem with it isn't really yours but of To Love Ru itself, as it flees any sense of action or drama into the basic harem comedy. Leaving very little meat to play with since the natural form of the characters other than Naruto is joking around.

In fact if you or even the base series had focused on it, the many suitors attacking could make for a great story (one major story in this crossover section uses it only to majority focus on how everyone is in love with Naruto even Rito as Riko). I would of even drafted Aliens from other series like Ben 10, DC or Marvel, Maybe even turn characters from other fandom's into Alien Suitors, like the Arrancar from Bleach, or Riser Phenex and other Devil's from DXD as a rival race to the Deviluke. And the story would be a simple one of Lala and then later Nana and Momo assist Naruto in fending of Gid's chosen suitors while they and the other Earth bound characters love him as well or even come into there own strength.

If you wrote a fic that has a non-living thing such as a loaf of bread as a focal point to a story it would've been more addicting then what this shit is.