| Reviews for Practice Makes Perfect |
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Rabakku chapter 1 . 2/21/2019 Dang, going through such a nice and well developed story for no ending, and it even ending on a sad note. How heart breaking. |
Fannec Fox chapter 6 . 5/24/2018 This is probably my favorite Chinari fanfic overall, if not one of my favorite fanfictions in general! I love the way you've developed this story, everything is right with it! Everyone is in character, the pacing is brilliant, and the plot itself is interesting and makes me wanna keep reading! I actually made an account for /just/ for this, and I'm even considering trying to mayyybbbeee finish it for you..? I want your permission first, of course, though! I just think this is too good tuo be left unfinished. I don't even know if you still use this account, or this website, but I wanted to post this anyways. Hope you can get back to me - |
SmexyStranger chapter 6 . 1/4/2018 5th time rereading it : still hoping for an update :D |
naughtyzoot chapter 6 . 9/21/2017 You'd think after years of reading fan fiction is check to see if stories are complete! I hope you finish this- the characterizations are spot on! |
Warlock of the Yuri Coven chapter 6 . 7/26/2017 Okay, it's quite easy to see there was some time in between this and the previous chapters but it's fine, the story stayed enjoyable. Sakurako-sama and the heroic Himawari delivered the goods and it was amusing, I admit the truth or dare was slightly predictable but I found myself smiling despite that. It's a pity you lost almost complete thing though as now this remains to be finished and it's been quite a few months. Hopefully this will be updated sooner than later, for now I'll be following it and cheering you on! |
Warlock of the Yuri Coven chapter 3 . 7/26/2017 Nice going, things heated up a little more than I expected in the second chapter but that was fine too~ It's cute and seems to go the way I'd like things to go which makes me both hopeful and little wary. Also yay for best girl and boob-chan (probably) making an appearence later! Not much else, not to mention anything sensible, to add. Enjoyable fluffy read so far. |
Warlock of the Yuri Coven chapter 1 . 7/25/2017 It's such a relief to come across a decent YRYR fanfic (in English, mind you) and even better to see it feature Akkarin and Chiina. I frowned slightly at all the lack of presence stuff in the beginning, but then it was a plot point more or less rather than stupid, overtly extended joke so you dodged that one. :) As for the chapter generally, not very long but it feels of appropriate length, ending in a bit of a cliffhanger. Very good writing, fluent, blessedly devoid of mistakes and various errors and the characters are, um, in character so I like what I've read so far. Not to mention I furiously approve of where this seems to be going~ Looking forward to reading the rest! |
RoseBloodmane chapter 5 . 7/10/2017 Nice story can wait to read more and see where this goes. I'm sure there is going to be ups and downs and family getting in the way will not help in the least bit. |
RoseBloodmane chapter 6 . 7/10/2017 I can see Akane actually make things worst until she realizes how sad her sister is. Anyways Interesting story much better then the anime if you ask me. The anime was to much of a comedy, although i think it would have been better as a romance/slice of life if ask me. |
Kakashi00521 chapter 6 . 7/9/2017 How sad it is to see this fic unfinished. But considering how this was published in 2013 and the latest update being almost 2017, I guess there might still be a possibility. Again, excellent fic! I love hurt! |
Kakashi00521 chapter 3 . 7/9/2017 Let me just say this: this is one of the best of Yuru Yuri. It simply is, out of the ~500 out there, this males it to the very top. This is so well written (the typographical mistakes are excusable) and so true to the characters especially Akari. I like what you did with Akari in chapter 1 because it really captured her childishness and showed people what they didn't know, which was Akari always speaking in third person. You captured their spirits excellently. The writing itself is top quality. The frequent changes in scene is a nice change of pace from most stories. Brilliant job with this. |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/14/2017 Ugh, this ending! You must finish this my friend, it is beautiful! Keep up the good work! |
Gigarot chapter 6 . 1/27/2017 The ending. |
GoldenWolf X chapter 6 . 12/28/2016 Omg, i thought this was abandoned! phewww. anyways, can't wait for an update! update when you can. |
ShadowAthems chapter 6 . 12/28/2016 I'm so glad you returned to writing this story. I was afraid you were going to abandon it like many other writers to with their stories. Anyways, good chapter, things will finally get solved and those two idiots will be together soon, I'm glad (although it would be nice if the other two end of together too at the end). I'll patiently await the next chapter, so take your time if you need to. |