Lol! This one is adorable

that's adorable!

An epilogue please! The ending was such a cliffhanger. XDDD

I like it , oneshot with athrun's pov and I think they will begin daily date in the elevator :)

Cute story! Haha, I loved AsuCaga when I first watched GSD almost 8 years ago, and I still love them now (was compelled to re-watch for some unknown reason).

Hope to read more from you :)

Cute..
Cute..
Cute..
Love it...!
Keep writing..
Long live Asucaga... :D

Great story i love it thank you so much KEEP IT UP :)

Simple yet demanding me to read more.. I loved the part when Athrun made a mental note to tranfered Yuna to somewhere else, please Athrun just fired him. LOL. XD

Well done, great fic. Thanks for shared this fic... :)
Looking foward for your next project of Asucaga, of course. LOL

cya :D

This is so cute. And that giving birth comment... HILARIOUS! Good job! :)

i love this simple! and so asucaga

A sweer, quiet setting and their core character was not exaggerated making this a pleasent and realistic read. Very much enjoyed this.

This is cute! I love the simplicity of the concept. You should keep writing. :)

"Hey, you want cookies?" It's just so Cagalli to not get all tense and bothered by their status/relationship. I've been missing this type of Cagalli in fics and looky here, you've revived it. :)

I don't know about the reactions in the elevator being odd, but when I had the luck of being stuck in an creaky elevator with 4-5 people, most of the passengers had began panicking, one worrying over her son while I was the cool and calm one on the outside, but on the inside I was wishing please don't fall please don't fall please don't fall. hahahaha. Eventually we had to crawl out because the elevator had stopped half way a floor.

Not sure if the texts in italic (minus the ones in brackets) it's wrong or right, but I tend to do this too and so far so good one has ever complained yet... :p so long as it doesn't take us away from the story, I guess it's all right?

Thanks for the read.

i love this story.
even though the idea is very simple, but that's what makes it great.
sometimes, we forgot to see the simple things, yet too striving reaching for something complicated. hahaha. me, play with words.
anyway, keep create story! i'd love to see your next story.

until next time,

mrs. zala

Niiiccee ) Awesome vocabulary and grammar! (I'm being constructive right?) Nice idea for the situation too...Stuck in an elevator, that's something we can relate to... (Only that I've never been stuck in an elevator with a girl before... *forever alone*)

I like how you just brought a minor thing and magnified it to fit the story... I mean...who knew elevators played a HUGE role in our career...the things we can do in a stopped elevator... Somehow this reminds me of another anime...

Anyways, I should stop ranting! I'm not really a desperate AxC fan, but this is good :) Keep up the good writings, that was a nice read!

Oh wow, cute fic...

Hope you could have made it longer. Coz im like what happened next...?

But seriously please make it longer! ;)

I soo agree with you about reading asucaga FC...I wont be able to concentrate on life without it..

Keep up the good work!

Hope GS FC's will still be alive for the years to come.

ESPECIALLY AxC ficss!