Hope this gets updated at some point great story

Hello!
I was fairly confused by the beginning of the fight between both Gallantmon. Kinda obvious later on who were who, but the confusing part wasn't THAT pleasing.. Lacked some Takato's PoV? I seriously think so, but kept the mysterious climate. A critic to that is that the "mysterious climate" was for too long and some missing stuff in between. Nevertheless, I'm excited for the next chapter which, I hope, comes out this year ._.

I think after this story is concluded you could do a side story or mini series about the seven demons Lord's just interacting. for example you could show how meetings would normally go. I have more ideas regarding this but I feel like this comment is already getting long enough so I hope you take my idea. into consideration, byeee.

Look, I don't want to be mean but most people on seem to want to not make negative reviews, well that or they make totally useless ones that just insult. Look, first off, you have basic competences, your story is gramatically sound and the story starts of pretty interesting but look. You drag out stuff way to long and that completely without any good reasons. I can clearly see why you want Takato to not meet the others again, that is, your reason, not any reason that he had for doing that aside from you wanting to drag things out. Now, that is actually pretty effective, because it puts people on edge but it is the bad kind of edge, bad kind of cliffhanger. Because they are constantly waiting for something that has no reason of not having happened already, or just want to know if what they fear is not true (with reika being all creepy and stuff wich I and many (from what I have seen in the reviews) don't like. Really, you have talent, I can really see that you have but I do not feel comfortable to not point out mistakes like that, because like I said, most people don't want to criticise but I think that as long as your are friendly about it it is nothing bad.

Hey I know you have your own problems but it has been 2 months since you last updated. Just wondering if you are still sticking to the more regular updates.

I will freely admit that I was confused by a good few things in this whole story, but I enjoyed it

please continue

I can't tell if u killed off takatos parents or took them hope he can save them if there not dead hope something good comes out of this for takato

I've really enjoyed this story so far, in particular how you've mixed the existing mythology with your own. There's some really cool ideas going on here. I was also surprised to find that I liked Hazaado. Takato having an "evil voice" inside his head has been done to death in fanfics, but this separates itself from those by giving him a well-defined personality as well developing his relationship with Takato. Kind of reminds me of Greed from FMA a bit.

I won't pretend that the story has been perfect, as I've come upon my share of nitpicks, but my only major criticism has been that Takato's reasoning for staying separate from his friends, specifically in Arc 3, is a bit flimsy and maybe even a tad OOC for Takato. While I agree he would do anything to protect his friends, I don't think he would keep them in the dark. While I understand Archenemy's "rules," the city is currently full of digimon that don't abide by those limits. I feel like Takato would risk letting them in on what's going on so they could get organized.

Regarding Chapter 18 specifically:

Part 1 was pretty intense, and had some interesting character development for Takato and the other Gallantmon. I'm not gonna lie, I felt for pretty exhausted with Takato after reading it.

It was cool to to have Digidestined back in Part 2, as there absence for most of this arc has been felt. I understand the story reasons for them being sidelined, but Takato's interactions with them and integration into their group was one of my favorite parts of Arc 2, particularly his relationships with Tai and TK. My one other thought is that you should take a quick glance at this part if it wasn't already part of the rewrites you did. I remember quite a few typos and the like.

The multiple Gallantmons in Part 3 had me a bit confused, but I think that's less on you and more me just not having the time to go back and reread older chapters. Just to recap: ChaosGallantmon was some kind of manifestation of Archenemy or other interested party and the Gallantmon that saved Rika was the one that dueled Takato? Anyway, can't wait to see what's next.

Well. Things certainly could have gone worse. That's not to say things haven't gotten worse, because they certainly have.

Rika had a brush with death, and her place got a little trashed. The Royal Knights are down a knight, though whether that's helpful remains to be seen.

Takato is pretty beat up, but at least he has a favor on the way.

Oh, and Beelzemon has popped up again! And quite amusingly too. Hope he can meet up with Takato soon.

Ah, that ending. How do these high stakes keep getting higher!?

Amazing chapter! Good work!

wow,, never expected that.
Reika killed takato parents?
Kinda hope not, if yes, i want takato killing her (and not quickly, but a really painful death and eternal pain for her soul

Okay, loads of stuff to take in. Rika let her mom in on most, if not all of what she knew of the situation. Alice has some new info to deliver. Rumiko and Renamon did some bonding, which was neat.

The DigiDestined know they aren't fully trusted, which normally wouldn't be a crippling issue. With all the damage Takato took, and what I'm sure is an argument with Hazaado in the works Takato himself will be in no condition for fighting soon.

To add on to that, the betrayal of the Demon Lords! Not terribly surprising, what with them being demons and all, but still devastating. Though there is the potential for in-fighting...

Regardless, Beelzemon is MIA, Yggdrasil and the Royal Knights aren't trusted, the Digidestined in the same boat and all the other complications are leaving Takato with no one to turn to. I'm sure I'm missing some stuff, but it does look like Takato, and the good guys, are pinned between a rock and a hard place.

Neat bit of lore about Lillithmon though.

Great chapter! Good work!

Bloody hell! I had to wait all summer to read this, and it was amazing! The revelations, the action, the philosophy! Is that what happened here? Philosophy? It's been a while since my philosophy class. Regardless, I feel smarter after this chapter! Ha!

What an ending! And such a devastating defeat of sorts. I mean, it's one of those endings where you feel like you kinda won something but objectively you lost badly.

Amazing chapter! Great work!

Please post another chapter. I love this story

Amazing chapter, why does this always update when I’m at work!