| Reviews for The Reunion |
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ElevatedJewel chapter 6 . 5/26/2015 Will you be continuing the story |
CrImIsOn ReGrEt chapter 6 . 1/2/2014 i really love this...wish you would upload a new chapter soon |
yveinn milli chapter 6 . 12/31/2013 A one hell of a story ;) Remember to continue it and I also look forward for Tenten's part |
Auntleona0 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013 I don't want you to take this as anything other than constructive criticism because I don't like leaving flames, but I had to quit this story when it became clear that a deep seated hatred of certain women was going to be a running theme. You start off by shaming women for making different clothing decisions and then add in an unbelievably catty Karin to forward the plot. Most fanfictions that do this have a problem where there lead protagonist turns into a Mary Sue as a result because they start to represent the ultimate idea of what a woman is supposed to be like. When your definition of femininity is so restrictive that only your lead can inhabit it, you are entering Mary Sue territory. I wish you the best and hope you grow as a writer in the future. |
Dattebayodobe chapter 6 . 8/10/2013 THIS IS SO PERFECT. AH PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Twisted Musalih chapter 6 . 8/10/2013 Cant wait to read more |
FairiesDescent chapter 6 . 8/10/2013 Hey I think you're doing a pretty good job on this fanfiction aside from not updating that often. |
Dattebayodobe chapter 5 . 7/10/2013 HAHAHAHHA THAT WAS SO GOODDD. I LOVED THE FIGHT. ABSOLUTELY PERFECT . |
FairiesDescent chapter 5 . 7/8/2013 I love your story! UPDATE SOON. OR ELSE I WILL SIC THE FANFICTION GODS UPON YOU! Please (: |
BoomPowMina chapter 5 . 7/8/2013 DAYUM WHAT A FIGHT |
BoomPowMina chapter 4 . 7/8/2013 WHO IS THAT GUY?! IS IT DEIDARA? OMG I LOVE DEIDARA, LIKE, MORE THAN LIFE xD |
BoomPowMina chapter 3 . 7/8/2013 WOOO GETTING LAID! xD |
BoomPowMina chapter 2 . 7/8/2013 Oh my god, Sakura, you have the best insults HAHAHA GO DIE IN A HOLE KARIN! |
BoomPowMina chapter 1 . 7/8/2013 I am not in any way a psycho...but i really want to kill Sasuke for that... |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2013 That whole scene after the fight confused the hell out of me. Who the hell is talking? |