| Reviews for The Invisible Children |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 7/15/2015 I love your story, it is so wonderful which is why I'm here to ask you to update/finish it, you said you'd updated it soon and it's been two years. I'm not trying to be rude or anything, I just really love your story and want to keep reading it |
 Juniorhughes chapter 9 . 2/23/2015 I Love this so much. You are so amazing, some spelling errors here and there, but all together I absolutely love it so much. It is fantastic. They part where she was almost kidnapped and raped were so well written. This story makes me laugh so much I love it. Please continue. You are a fabulous writer |
| BroadwayAngel3 chapter 9 . 9/11/2014 Please continue! |
| theatregirl2013 chapter 5 . 2/9/2014 i love this chapter! (made me cry though. a lot. especially since i was listening to I'm Alive reprise during it...) |
| Theatrenerd13 chapter 2 . 2/3/2014 I. Love. This. Story. So. Friggin. Much. Like seriously I love how it shows Gabe as having more of a personality. And Amelia is just plain awesome and...well pretty much Natalie. (oh and in I'm Alive reprise, he talks about cancer, but I'm not sure if that was,metaphorically or something but that may be the reason for his death. Just for help :) But seriously you're an amazing writer) |
| ksbrou chapter 9 . 12/5/2013 What's happening to Gabee? poor baby, he's getting this whole being-alive thing so serious! I hope he gets used to it and that he controls himself! Ugh I waited a long time for this story! I'll patiently wait for the next chapter! Lovelovelove the relationship between those two! |
| SparkBomb'sFaith chapter 9 . 12/2/2013 To whoever write this story, I love you! The story is wonderful and perfect and it makes my day when you post a new chapter - It feels like an early Christmas present when you do haha xx |
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/3/2013 yayyyyyyy you updated! Gahhhh it's so good please keep going at a steady pace! |
| countrygal98 chapter 8 . 8/26/2013 Please continue! I love it! |
| ksbg chapter 8 . 8/26/2013 Don't you dare stopwriting this! the chapter was amazing and I love all this new Alive!Gabe thing going on, I love how he's all confused I cant wait to read more! |
| tveitortotnerdfighter chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 will you please update before i explode your such a great writer the story is fantastic |
| ksbg chapter 7 . 5/22/2013 Girl! I will love you forever if you update :) |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/13/2013 PLEASE UPDATE |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/11/2013 Please update ur killing me here |
| ksbg chapter 1 . 5/8/2013 I am hooked!11111111 geez, I love Gabe |
