great new chapter I loved you're story

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Love this one! Just simply perfect!

loved this story... beautifully told about our favorite couple...sal

Holy buckets... and gosh darn it, With the Grain melted all the snowbanks... again! This was such a wonderfully sensuous and erotic chapter, with some mind melting descriptions. And I always love the way you weave all the emotions into the physical - it reads so naturally and flows so well. It all adds up to a beautiful whole.

Loved the emphasis on how they're both complete and that he didn't need words to describe how he feels... not pushing to make him talk is what sets her apart from his other women. It makes their mental and emotional connection stronger and you convey that beautifully.

Loved this, it summed it all up beautifully - Gibbs' hard body underneath her and the mere presence of him here when she thought she'd be forced to endure another night without him made her further realize just how much they were meant to be together.

And I loved that mini 'moment' when she let slip about the house and her understandable worry that she'd said too much. And for a man of few words, the few he does use are usually spot on and heartfelt - so this was a lovely sentiment. If any good came from me being away, it's that I know I don't want to be apart from you...you're all I want."

You have reduced my computer to a melted heap of silicon and I am a melted pile of goo! This chapter is so hot and erotic. It absolutely sizzles with amazing sex. When you started describing the image of Gibbs’ body lying on that blanket, I fell out of my chair! And their sexual position had me rushing out the door for a snowbank to thrash in. The powerful emotions and feelings you weave in among all the images are beautiful and real.

Love how well Abby knows Gibbs and doesn’t need him to say everything in words what he is so good at conveying in his actions. This bit… Abby knew him and that their connection went beyond words. (it’s so easy to see how true this is.)

Their conversation when Gibbs tells her that she’s all he wants and Abby’s response that she’ll always be in his heart is so tender and sweet. This bit… relief washing over them that they both believed what was between them would stand the test of time… (happy sigh)

This line… "Thank you for coming home to me...for showing me how important I am to you, how important we are." (really sums up this entire story very nicely.) I loved this story from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent as a writer.

This chapter went from excitement to smokin’ hot! You did a wonderful job of building the thrill and anticipation towards Abby finding him in the box. Absolutely LOVE that she crawled into the box with him!

So many poignant moments with Abby’s thoughts on how much a part of her life Gibbs had become in such a short time. You really brought out how much she missed him with lines like this… While they'd only been separated for days, to her it felt like weeks… and this… everything that she touched and smelled was a reminder that he wasn't there with her. (you are so good at conveying these deep emotions.)

OMG, you had me flailing and fainting with the description of her nibbling, kissing, and licking his neck after she removed the bow tie! That was SO hot!

You really ramped up the heat with your erotic descriptions of Gibbs undressing her along with their teasing banter as she removed the bow to reveal his little Marine! (GAH!)

Another outstanding update. Thank you

I loved the ending This was a fantastic little story.
Tanya

Wow! Hot, hot, hot!
Wonderful writing

Dreamy and fiery images of passion here. Love the way Gibbs was wrapped - I want him for my Christmas present next year!

Great ending.

Cute story, love the idea of a naked gibbs in a box :)

Aww! Great story! Truly enjoyed! Thanks for writing it!

Wowza...there go my brain cells...

Glad you kept some of those bunnies for yourself lolol! ;)