How this is a One-Shot I don't know. This is the start to an awesome book, story whatever. I hope somebody took it and ran with it because this needs to be longer. I want to know what happens.

OMG i certainly did not expect the ending! It defiantly give you something to wrap your mind around. Great job!

Split huh? Interesting. I wonder halves of the same soul or two different beings. Looking forward to more!

It seems like most of the reviewers would take your story if you just add a second chapter that would explain what's going on. You wouldn't be making a full story; just add more to this.

I can see the potential, but i don't know who the figure on the throne is supposed to be anyway. Seeing what comes next would be interesting in the least.

This is interesting, it would be cool were you to continue it.

fhghfd I want this to be longerrrr. I'm no good at AUs, rarely am, actually, but maybe, MAYBE, I can make something out of this, sometime ... not sure. Someone else'll probably snag it before me ...

Cool!

Nice build-up. I've seen a few "Danny is king of the Ghost Zone after Reign Storm" fics, but I've never seen this particular take on it.

this is a friggin ONESHOT? WHHHAAAAAT?

AGH.
i'm going to do some continuation of this in the summertime (when i'll supposedly have time...or maybe just anytime i'm going to have time.)

this is...completely unexpected. whoa. sirius, sirius twist at the end. completely threw me for a fruit loop.

fenton as human and normal and phantom as the king...oh gods.
but why is he still worrying about ghosts if his two parts are split up?
and gods, it's like multiple personality disorder...gods. o.o
SO MANY POSSIBLITIES!

So they were once one and the same?

I really like this one shot. I want you to finish it, but at the same time I like it as is, but if you do continue it then there are so many possibilities...
If you come up with a good enough idea, you should definately continue. Sorry to say I can't come up with anything. Good luck!

That was good.

Coolio. I liked it. I don't know how you could make this into a multiple story, but it is possible. I always find it easier if you planned it ahead of time, but, you never know. You should try if you can, I think it would be interesting to read this a full blown story.

I see either the beginning of a pitch pearl long-ish one-shot, or the start of an interesting story where Phantom and Danny become a halfa (perhaps an undercover operation to infiltrate the enemies of the Ghost Zone and take them down from the inside). One where the line between Fenton and Phantom starts to become blurred the longer the merge goes on, and a reverse identity crisis occurs - which is to say, just about the opposite of every story where the two of them separate and form different personalities, likes and interests.

Maybe Phantom's curious about the human world, and Fenton's how he can experience it. Or he's just trying to get rid of a threat to his kingdom. Either way, this could be the start of something interesting.