Its good. I liked the hesitation from Jades part because its true Beck was the one with the problem in their relationship. Jade was always there for him.

it was good

I liked it. It os difficult to see Beck's way and os Nice to think he knows he screwd up and is trying to make it better

FANTASTIC. I felt like this was needed on Jade's behalf.

Hey!
Wow! This was a really interesting perspective to look at. For the record, I live wordiness (within reason) and I think you have the right amount. I think my favourite descriptive bit is the window with the light framing. You've got a great way of describing curves of the body.
Really nice fic! I can't wait to read your other works!
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I like it a lot,but i have a question;if they did their activities on the window,no one was there to see their love affair or weren't they afraid of such thing? Just a silly question. But you're really skillful,great job and i hope you'll make more bade stories.

This was absolutely PERFECT. :)

Awesome job!

That was amazing, your writing skills make me jealous!

That was the absolute best thing I've read in this fandom. So beautiful and I think quite in character. I've been toying with the outline of a story for a while in which Jade is slightly closed off to Beck after they get back together . . . similar things like not allowing his touch quite as long, also from Beck's perspective. I really feel like that could happen and that it wouldn't be Jade trying to hurt him but trying to protect herself. I think that Jade not feeling 100% comfortable and trusting with Beck would be the one thing to really scare him. Please don't stop writing Bade!

i love it and its so wonderful! ;) you cant stop writing amazing stories like these! ;) byeeee!

This is really perfect. I know its a "kids show" but I wish there had been more build up and dialogue about their relationship. Love your writing, too bad you won't write much for a whole. I won't be either soon. Anyway, love the story!

I thought I would be very sad reading this, and I felt that way when reading the first four lines or so, but ending made me happy. I like how you started off with how unsettled they were beneath the surface while having the second part very graceful and soft-like and lacking the loudness and tension they had before the break up. I thought that mood fit nicely with the whole morning sunlit bedroom setting.

I also liked Beck giving her time even though, considering how fast he got on stage, he was very eager to have her back? He seemed very distraught about being shut out, but I'm happy that his waiting paid off and that they came to terms with what happened in the end.

I didn't want to overload you with your own quotes but I can't promise that anymore if this is the last Bade from you!

"In his rare moments of maturity and clarity though, Beck understands, at least a little." We always get mad at Beck it seems, but it's true that he is just a teenage boy who's still learning and I liked that he acknowedged that.

"This is forgiveness, Beck thinks with a grimace when pulls away just as he tries to deepen the kiss, it takes time." It reminds me of Jade's line that I liked so much in 'unmarked margins'! Your focus on forgiveness is really great, especially since things have to happen hastily on the show.

And this is just a dump of lines that I thought were the prettiest of the pretty:
"he'd held her whole world in his palm once, and decided he didn't want the weight anymore"
"Beck can feel the moment like a tangible object: can grip it in his hand almost, can separate it in his mind, can draw a thick, straight, bright yellow line across the seconds right before and the seconds right after"
"the way the sunlight slips through all of her negative space"
and the some things never change and other things are changing all the times lines, wow

Seriously, I think you caught their relationship better than Dan Warp himself - they do need time, and I think this fic really explains how they can get together. I mean, of course I am more than happy that they came back together on the show, but it kid

Jesus. This is perfection. Legit perfection. Like...write a book already.

I love it! It was so good and so well written. I'll miss your bade stories very much! Why is this the last one?