woah momma. I like this.

I think you should continue on with the story :) love it.

This was very well written and I enjoyed reading it immensely. What was really incredible was that in a little over 2,000 words you made me feel their history together...I would love to see their future play out. Should you consider writing a sequel I would enjoy reading it!

Fantastic Job.

Hot and lovely.

Fantastic work. well written and i love the POV ... Please Please Please do a sequel...

Oh god... at first I was quite... well, embarassed by the way that you included the reader in this story, but then it became almost natural. It was intense and incredibly well written ! Is it wrong to love a man who doesn't exist ? :D

Congratulations, really. This story deserves to be read by every woman who loves escaping from reality for falling in Thorin's strong arms.

Please, please continue !

I love this! I like how you made this before Smuag took Erebor. Please make a sequel!

Well, this was something I didn't know I wanted. Goodness, it's warm in here.

So hot! Nice job! I caught some spelling mistakes however. You often have "you" instead of " your" and it says " the room is quite plan" instead of plain" other than that, very steamy!

This was simply outstanding, you've caused my love for Thorin to grow, if that is even possible!

Please write another one!

AMAZING! I love Thorin and you did amazing! I myself am working on a fanfic of The Hobbit. :) Great work I will be reading this again.

Mesmorizing, wow, truly amazing..

loved this story!