Just reread this story. I really love you work. Missing it.

First and foremost, great story! Just one bit I don’t quite understand, what is the private collection at F Fruit? Why would Jasper and Alice custom made something for F Fruit?

Man this was an awesome story! I loved how severe the punishments were, they were great! Its nice to see Carlisle so strict, wish more people wrote like this. Most spanking scenes now-a-days are a few licks and done, WTF. We read these types of stories for a reason, we like the discipline. Thanks for doing such a great job, I know the story is old but I still enjoyed it very much. Would love to see a new one just like it someday.

This is a great story I really enjoyed it the punishment seemed a little harsh to me but that is still part of the story I just don't get why in all the stories Jasper is the second in command I guess it must be that way in the regular books but I've never read them so I don't know I just think Rose should be the one that should be second-in-command I think Jasper is too wrapped up in anything Alice does to be objective I think it's asking for trouble. If Alice is involued he will flip on the others?

loved every bit of the sappy but awesome family fic

not a fan of the swearing

plz write more fics

Ok I know you probably won't see this but...no fair. Cliffhanger much. Lol. This makes the second time I read this fanfic. Keep writing.

Another wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work!

Another wonderful chapter! I loved how Emmett came in and cheered Jazz up! Nice work! Keep it up!

Another great chapter. I liked how Jasper accepted Carlisle's offer as second in command! Keep up the good work!

Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!

Another great chapter. Poor Jasper. He sure got a harsh punishment, not to mention that Carlisle told the rest of the family about his flaws! Keep up the good work!

Another great chapter. I feel sorry for poor Jasper, although I do agree he got what he deserved. Keep up the good work!

Great first chapter. This is my first time reading this story and so far, I like what I've read. Keep up the good work!

Poor Jasper. Why he gets himself in these predicaments I will never know.

I noticed a spelling error in the second to last paragraph. You might want to change "U" to "You"

Great story thank you. :-D