cute... _

I would love to know what will happen during their triad wedding...or will there be really a triad wedding?

I wish there would be more chapters...FeelingHopeful

ang haba ng buhok ni Wolfram!the king and the great sage

wow...this is wonderful!

Omg amazing and embarassing but awesome

Threesomes are so my kink! I love your personal view of this universe. Your Sage and Wolf are so very good! But I think you don't like Yuuri a lot...

Oh I'm starting to have a thing for Wolfram and Murata XD

Huh I don't think I realized the first time that I read this that this story is finished. I love your writing style and I find the marriage you proposed in this fic rather interesting. I'm glad this ended with a happy ending even though it left me wanting more. Also Wolf thinking Yuuri was going to get lucky with the made because of Yuuri's flirting was pretty funny.

I was rereading this fic and I have to say that the ending of this chapter is very powerful. It made me teary eyed when Wolfram buried his face into Murata's neck and sighed that everything was a lie. I really like Murata's response about them being beautiful.

I really enjoyed this fic. I liked the way you began in the middle of the story to catch the reader's attention.

I am so glad with how this panned out. I didn't want any of them to have to choose. Such a difficult thing to behold, choosing between two soulmates. I like Murata and Wolfram together. But I know that the bulk of people want Wolfram and Yuuri, though I'm not sure it will ever get anywhere in canon.

Thanks for the entertainment!

mmm im not s sure about that one, yes 3 somes r good and all but eh erm uh mmm

I thought the story was great unTil the end. It threw my off. Oh well it was good while it lasted.

I haven't finished reading all the chapters, but so far, it is completely amazing! Keep up the good work! I really hope you make more stories that have great plot!

I am really liking your story idea. You write very well and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you :D

This story has a really interesting premise, and I'd like to see it explored to a bit more depth than you do here. You've got a lot of intriguing ideas, such as Wolfram falling in love with someone else, his family trying to talk him out of the engagement to Yuri, and just the exploration of Murata's previous incarnations in general. I enjoyed the story, and some parts of it I flat-out loved (Wolfram confronting Gwendal and Murata about their lies, as well as Yuri, Murata and Wolfram after the party). However, there were some parts of it that were a bit jarring as I read. I don't know which part of this story was the experimental ones for you, but there were at least two parts that I think need elaboration for the story to run smoothly.

My favourite part was the ending (entirely based on the cute, I confess), but the story leaves me to fill a few too many gaps, mainly on Yuri's part. I realise that the KKM fandom does not lack for fic about Yuri coming to terms with being into guys, but most of the time that's because canon demands it. When Yuri spends so much of canon going on about how everyone's insane for not seeing how weird it is for him to be engaged to Wolfram, I at least need to see at least SOME explanation for why he's changed his mind when he's completely okay with it in fic.

Some of the same goes for Murata and his feelings for Wolfram - he goes from "maybe attracted but disinterested because it's his best friend's fiancé" to being ready to court him in less than a week. I'd really like to see what happened between the end of chapter 3 and the ritual where Murata summons his previous incarnations, because obviously things happened during that time skip to make matters more urgent and for Murata's feelings to change.