Beautifully done! It has this. . . flow to it that I look for in stories. Overall, this is well paces, developed, and appealing to my picky tastes. I really love it :) I assume the title is "suicide" in a different language? If so, what language is it?

Your writing is so sensitive that it hurts. This story is incredibly beautiful.
"Do not go where I can not follow, and I promise I will never stop." - This single phrase floored me and marked my soul.

Made me cry. Always wondered how Hawke got through it all. Excellent use of chocolate!

A lovely well written story. As painful as it is beautiful I loved the relationship between mother and daughter, Marian and fenris. Well done!