Eeeee this was so awesome!

Wow, this was really good and amusing! You did an excellent job of this and depicted it quite well. Death was strangely likable, haha. Not many people can pull that off, and believe me, I've read a number of fics that have tried to introduce Death. People just don't get how Death works. I'm impressed you did. Good job!

Anyway, I don't know what else to say, but I thought I'd just leave a review to let you know that you'd done a really good job. This is going in my favorites because it's too amusing not to. *snickers* Take care!

Really great loved how u ended it in both chapters but kept that mysterious feeling

Wow ! Loved this fic ! Both chapters were funny but in two very different ways (your Death is simply awesome !)
Great work )

WHATEVER FLOATS YOUR OH MY GOD WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU (TOO CLEVER) HAHAHA POOR JACK Ohh I just love how you write death! Honestly, if you ever become a professional writer, be sure to include death in whatever you're working on because people are going to LOVE him. He's very cool. Yeah.

I CAN'T WITH THIS DEATH WILL BE THE DEATH OF ME I SWEAR (QUITE LITERALLY, YEAH?) OH GOD THIS IS BRILLIANT I NEVER THOUGHTI COULD BE SO HAPPY TO READ ABOUT JACK DYING BUT I JUST THIS IS SO HAPPY I'M DYING

Funny and awesome!

This is awesome. You make death a really awesome gender neutral character, as weird as that sounds to say. XD

How did you make me like, or love- gah, enjoy, there we go, the character personification of Death so much?

How?

I absolutely love it.

I DON'T KNOW WHETHER TO LOVE YOU OR HATE YOU. THIS WAS LOVELY.

HAH this is great

"Crap that's a lot of work..." xD Favorite line. Ever.

Didn't I tell you Death was becoming my favorite character? They're amazing! And they make me laugh- Like, laugh until I cry kind of laugh.

Great job, a wonderful TWOSHOT. *cough*

I feel kind of bad for Death, though. It must be pretty lonely. Don't worry Buddy! I'll keep ya company!

Death: Who is this girl, and why is she calling me Buddy? Author! I demand you remove her!

Sorry. Rambling.

Anyway, great job! :3

Oh! Ohhh! And if you get the chance, could you create a oneshot or something just about Death (maybe enter a hint of the Guardians in there, but can it be in Death's point of view? :D) But that's just if you can find the time. I know life can be hectic. :3

Thank you SO MUCH for writing this, It truly is awesome.

Cirruz

Lol never imagined Death could be such a badass \m/

Ah a card playing skeleton you read my mind.

Sarcastic ass, they are.
But funny XD