Adorable. That's the only thing I can say. There were no grammar mistakes ( not that I noticed anyways) and the whole process of Hibari realizing his true feelings was so refreshing, and I like the way you described the OC character, Ren. He played a significant part.

SO KAWAII! I WILL DIE OF CUTENESS!

Ah sorry I didn't believe you when u said the haya-chan and Takeshi training thing in the end...I know something jappened.,...~

Reborn the little bastard... But that's why we love 'im! Hibari was just so cluelessly adorable, and Tsuna was the normal grade of adorable that made Hibari like that! I really loved reading this, so thanks for posting!

Great job! I really like this story

waaaa...
waaaaaaaa...

so sweet... XDD
kyou-chan n tsu-chan are so adorable...

kawaii that's so adorable!

THIS WAS SO CUTE! I loved it so much, I couldn't stop smiling since the beginning. I would love a sequel if you could!

Aww so cute X3
Hibari's first reaction to his feeling were so... Hibari-ish.. '

does this mean this is a oneshot fic? i'm slightly confused by that.

anyhow, i like the story :)

I think this one is better :)) and I can't wait for the next chapter? What happened to Gokudera and Yamamoto anyways? Well there be an 8059 ?

e u e this is really good and cute. i love the small, step by step fluff. i hope you'll continue!

Nice story dude! I love it even though Hibari is SLIGHTLY OOC but still in character. Did that make sense? Oh well. Update soon pls!

This is intruiging,

I can't wait for the next chapter; this is getting good! Keep up the good work!

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