Please continue. Please make it to were Rose doesn't leave. Please I couldn't bare her leaving now

Noo there has to be more to this story I just love it too much. ahhh! *fangirling*

Can you please make it so some how they save rose before she goes back to the other universe. Please do that I don't think that the Doctor could take it knowing that rose is pregnant and knowing what will happen next

Nice story. I hope you update soon. I really want to see what happens next :).

Good story :D.

Stay awesome!

Grwat story, you totally got me hooked! Keep writing or i might die!

This story starts out promising. I love stories of future offsprings. But now I'm scared to read any further since it looks like this is going to be a River/Doctor in the end. I can't stand River/Doctor pairings. Please tell me this isn't a River/Doctor story?

I know that River is going to be Sarah's step mom and all... But you should totally have Rose come back! And have Eleven with Rose, rather than River cuz... Come on man! Rose trumps River in the Doctor Relationship Department!

when Rose and the Doctor is gonna be a real couple?

Love this story, hope you continue it and update soon :)

Please update soon!

Awwwww cute little doctor daddy, the domestic approach time. How heart warming! so cute! Arghhh o more chapters! Update soon- i really wanna see older Sarah soon and maybe even a little 11th?

Ahhhh here is Sarah's old home...I feel all angsty thinking of Rose's second trip here...sigh...one more chapter to go!

Awwwww...goodbye doggie...is it gonna go to Sarah Jane then? Keep up the great work! Waiting to see older Sarah again!

Yay DOGGIE! I love dogs. They're so cute. Sarah's the best. I love how she's besting Mickey. Let's hope she doesn't get TOO cocky though,...

I always get teary thinking of the Doctor's lost life...i'm wonderng about Sarah's abilities as well. Are Tim Lord genes more dominant? Who know...well you do...