The premise is really good (hallucinations due to lack of sleep) but the spelling detracts a bit from the story - maybe you'd like to correct some of the words at a later date? All in all, a very original fic. Keep posting.
Cheers,
Ocaso.

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Kudos!

Loved your story! So erotic and also sweet!