THAT DIMWITTED, MOUSEBRAINED, IMPOSIBLY STUPID, BLIND MOLE AAGH ! I'm so frustrated with Anakin right now I could scream.

This story was amazing! I enjoyed every second!

Amazing

Yayyyy a happy ending.

Good story.

This is my favourite chapter, I especially love the bonding between Luke and Padme.

This is such a great book! The time line is off at times but over all still really great! I loved reading it!

Beautiful!~

Lol Mace Windu fell a hell of a lot more than 20 feet. Coruscant is an Ecumenopolis, which is a planet where the city covers 100 percent of it. It's also stacked, layers upon layer, story after story, mile after mile. And Mace Windu plummetet from the highest point to the lowest point lol. 20 feet? Did u watch the movie? No, he fell a loooooong way

Yeah! Love happy ending :). This was an awesome story. Loved it.

God Bless.
Tauriel Skywalker

I love how klutzy and awkward Luke is. He really is just a kid. Uh oh, and Daddy's not to impressed right now. Loving this story.

Heck yea, Luke isn't

Cool

Glad everything worked out! Though, could you please please write about what happened after the end of chapter 20?

Well, I'm glad he didn't kill Dooku. But, I'm very confused: I thought Anakin knew Padme was pregnant? In chapter 2, you say "he let his thoughts drift to Padme and their unborn child". You might want to fix that.