Please continue this story. The mystery is really intriguing. I want to see what Desmond discovered. I want everybody to be safe. I am curious who the light is. I want to know what's going on with Altiar. I want to know what will happen to Ezio. I want to see how Connor into all of this. I also want to see some celebration smut at the end among all four assassins. Please continue. This story is really good. I look forward to more when you have the time.

I like this fanfic, but find it really annoying how you do the translations. This chapter was especially bad because there were so many of them. I get wanting to have another language in the story because they all speak different ones, but when there are so many sentences and you HAVE to go to the bottom of the chapter to find the translations, that gets annoying quick, because every time you have to go back up and find the spot you were at and that takes time. Maybe, just as a suggestion, you could write out the translations in a parantheses after the sentence? At least in these heavy translated chapters, because it kinda puts me of reading it. But i like the story, so i'll keep reading, just think on the suggestion.

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Hope your doing good and Thanks for updating!

Oh my Lord. You're back! This chapter was amazing. So good. Can't wait for the nest one.

Thanks for updating...saw some reviews...I think all this could be solved with an apple of Eden that likes Desmond...

if he ever did lose an ancestor they just go in there and fondle him in a ghost like manner since no one but they can see the ghost anyway...might not even be a ghost...

Plz update, I need to know more!

Please continue. I love the story. The characterizations are good. The interactions are good. The story is good the sex scenes are good. Though it would be nice to have a foursome with Connor. Also I miss Altiar. And I am confused of what's going on. Plus I feel Desmond might be might be misunderstanding something here. Also I feel if any of his ancestors die, Desmond would also cease to exist, unless you are going with one of the other time travel theories. Also Desmond finds a solution that doesn't involve betraying them. Desmond needs a scene where he mourns his modern friend's, because I feel he kind of adjusted to quickly to that fact. You could at least have a flashback scene of him mourning. Why was Alriar trapped in the POE for so long? Why was Desmond just transported there? How did they arrive at Maysef? Why are they separated? What did the cave paintings say, etc.? There are so many unanswered questions. Otherwise, everything else about the story is good. I look forward to a continuation in the future.

Hate to remind you, but Desmond has topped Altiar and Ezio on several occasions, though he is mostly bottom, since this is a sequel to the other story.

Quick comment, his name is Desmond MILES, but otherwise great story so far.

really? the important thing about desmond is his status as someone's lover?

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKK :DDD YAY AN UPDATE! I WILL HAVE TO SPEND MY DAYS OFF REREADING AND READING THE UPDATE! YAY SO EXCITED :D

im in love

Didn't Desmond top Ezio once in problem with the animus chapter 17 i believe? there might have been another chapter with him on top though. well the only reason i brought it up was becaue in this you said he had never topped so yeah thought id mention.

OMGG HOLY SHIT! Okay where do i even begin with the awesomeness that was the first story it was absolutely awesome and adorable and i read it like three times before realizing you'd actually written a sequel that involved connor and i was like oh awesome connor gets thrown into the mix of the adorable sexiness that is this story, but no! What i get is this epic tale of a sequel that has this epic plot that has me on the edge of my seat and wondering what the hell is going on and what is happening all the while questioning what could be the out come! Omgg writer i dont even know where to begin in my praise of your ability to write epicness for this otp or whatever you wanna call it. I read fan fiction all the time and i am often open minded to the different writing styles of other authors as I am a writer myself of both my own ideas and fan fiction, but omgg rare is that i find one that so completely pulls me in and puts me on the edge of my seat like im reading a friggin new york times best seller! PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAVEN'T GIVEN UP ON THIS?! I realize life gets in the way and that it might be part of the reason why its been a little over a year since its been updated, but I hope to god you have not completely abandoned this story cuz i desperately want to see where this is going and how it will end!