Wow, I really really love this story!

This is really good, minus some minor grammatical errors. Just make sure to proof read a few times to catch them

I really like the plot so far. Plase continue.

I'm so glad to see a new update, can't wait for what's next!

Wow. Can't believe you updated! Yay!

Great chapter, thank you for the update and I cannot wait for the next one!

Think that he should ask to see Severus again soon think he should become proper good friends with regulus and severus Looking Forward to next Chapter

Been there got the T-shirt and hate the frustration it brings with it. Feel free to vent to me if the ignorant are a pain. The sad thing is most of us are highly inteligent but are treated like idiots.

good chapter

Great chapter. I love this story. It's a really good read and I look forward to reading what happens next.

Yay! Thank you so much for uploading! Love this story!

Isn't Lucius around the same age as James and Severus? And those Slytherins should either be expelled or suspended or in detentions the whole year! D: HOW DARE THEY BEAT UP POOR RHY! -hisses angrily-

Maybe put him in Ravenclaw? That's a good, neutral house.

I love it. Hopefully, you will update someday,
To answer your question in this chaper, I think they should make example of the students who hurted Rhyel. He could die from this and students should know how little is necessary to kill him. So I guess massive point loss, detentions and 14 days expulsion.

I hope you realize that this your a really good writer. This is such a well thougtout and genuinely interesting fanfic. Yah, there are a few spelling errors but your actual writing skill overshadows it so much that the errors seem very minor even if it would bother me with other writers. I really hope that you continue this fic but if not, at least keep writing.