Reviews for Where the Heart Is
Random chapter 22 . 6/29
The word you're looking for is "Venomous" not poisonous.
Other than that, good story.
For.the.LOVE.of.Severus chapter 1 . 4/13
I know this is an old fic but is it on hiatus or discontinued?
Blackjack Emrys chapter 22 . 6/1/2019
No you can't leave it here. Please update!
Manasvi Shroff chapter 1 . 11/3/2018
loved it...pls update...
rowenasheir chapter 21 . 4/27/2018
Please continue the story. Ideas:
Harry is confident with parseltongue, what if his snake sneaks in and talks to the dragons before the tournament. The three ladies look forward to being chosen for him so they can let the humans know what they want and need. After a chat, the dragons believe he needs more protection than just a snake and he get three "dragon aunties" to AD shock and horror! ...in the second task there is a an apalala dragon (river dragon) sent by his 'aunties" to help in time of need and ... when he is abducted during the third task all three go and fry Narcissa, the DE and Pettigrew! Voldy can't out live dragon fire which destroys him body and soul. AD manipulations come to light and his magic bound - suddnly it is realised that his beard is a magical contruct, confundus charms and imperious curses collapse and he is revealled as the true Dark Lord -GG not AD who actually in Nurengard!
A young, prevoiusly mistreated, small dragon, without a mamma is sent to the manor for their and his protection!
jason keith chapter 17 . 2/18/2018
Dear writer,
I really really like your story and generally have little to no trouble with any grammar or spelling mistakes I find because your writing is quite pleasant to read, but there is just one thing that really bothers me. You keep calling snakes poisonous, they are not. Snakes are venomous and there is quite big difference between things being poisonous and venomous. And good way to remember this is to remember that when something is poisonous, you will die when YOU bite IT (so touch, lick, bite, eat, etc.). However if an animal is venomous you die if IT bites YOU. So if you could please please please change this? Other than this you have been doing an amazing job so keep on writing!
Jake
Ps: sorry for any English mistakes of my own but English is not my first language.
Femalefan chapter 14 . 12/31/2015
I'm guessing that Ron is the spy due to the Weasley family (minus the twins, and maybe Charlie, Bill, and Ginny) being loyal to Dumbledore. There were a few grammar and spelling errors like Dobby's name.
rmiser1994 chapter 22 . 3/23/2015
that was a sweet confession by sirius . ... cannot wait to read more! .
marthapreston4 chapter 10 . 3/13/2015
awww that first hug after a trauma is so great
yaoichallenge21 chapter 22 . 2/25/2015
Wow, this is truly an amazing story and i cant wait to read more! I had recentally had a simular idea, having Harryt more like the original, and him being put into Slytherin. Its amazing tho. Its alot more thought out than i would have been able to make it, and has alot of wonderful plot bunnies. I definately prefer ur version. Mine would be pitiful in comparison, lol. Im also happy about what recentally happened. Them getting caught and Draco's reaction was icing on the cake. :) Anyways, im loving this story and cant wait for ur next update. Keep it coming!
Vivianne95 chapter 22 . 2/15/2015
Love this chapter ending!
Please Update Again!
Jassxx3 chapter 22 . 2/9/2015
This is brilliant! I love this story so much! I know you haven't updated this in a couple of years but it would be great if you could continue it :) xx
AnimangaLoverFE chapter 22 . 12/14/2014
this story is awesome...i really love the plot and i adore the new lucius,severus,draco,harry and sirius...i absolutely love the relationships harry has developed with the rest of the characters and i hate narcissa...i really want to know what happens next so please continue this story and update as soon as you can...
Guest chapter 22 . 10/16/2014
This is an interesting story! I hope you write more.
Kaya70 chapter 22 . 7/4/2014
Love it plz update soon
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