It could use some work. But the idea is good.

This is amazing! I love it!

I love your stories, but they have a few grammar mistakes. Thanks and keep up the good work! Please make sure to review your stories!

She went into the past! Holy crap!

It would be interesting if I could read it... You need to capalize, first off.
"hello" he said. what you put
"Hello," he said. what is correct.

Also, enter is a nice way to space your paragraphs. Makes it easier to read.
One last thing I have a problem with is the OOC of them, at least I'm not sure about that... You don't explain anything. Why would Merdia put down her bow? Why would Hiccup call himself that?

I hope you don't take this too hard, I'm saying this to help you. :) constructive flame

wait, chapter 2 or chapter 3. make up your mind

I usually don't read mericup but this one's great!

Interesting Sequel, I hope you continue it as it will be interesting to see how this will play out. Also, it appears your handwriting has gotten better, which has improved the way your story both looks and how it reads, so truly good job.

What?! You had Astrid married to MacIntosh?! How did THAT happen?! That HAD to have been an arranged marriage because there is absolutely NO way Astrid would've gone for someone who's like Snotlout in personality. lol

I don't know. But I know she is a princess. Hiccup's daughter.

YES?!

Okay, you got me intrested in seeing where this is going. Looking forward to this sequel!

This was a great story.
I hope that you do write a sequel to it.
Keep up the great work.

Work on the difference between "definitely" and "defiantly". Other than that, awesome writting! Oh, and the word thing I wrote here does not affect reading, BTW.

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