Woooow
Soooo happy to read this again... I started from the top just to get into it loved your writing and that didnt change. So good.

Thanks for the lovely updates. What a nail biter. What will Max do? What will happen in to Isabel?

so happy you are writing. again. the instagram cast rewatch has me wanting more fanfiction

“I don’t know what I would do with a general from another planet. God, the whole thing would be so cliché.”

“Saved by the alien king,” Liz said, smiling. “You know, that’s a road not taken I wouldn’t mind revisiting.”

“Well, Queen Elizabeth Parker has a nicer ring to it than Elizabeth Parker, M.S.”

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Foreshadowing?

Apart from that, interesting window into Van's mind. He is ruthless, which was obvious from the previous parts. But here, it's more focused on his reactions to Max being Zan or not Zan or half-Zan and it's not really encouraging. I had hoped that after knowing his brother a little, and Earth, too, he would be less... antarian about if, if you get my meaning. But he just seems so dangerous. Of course, he has led a life of battles, wars, tortures, lack of freedom. He fought for his people, his planet and in his brother's name. His loyalty is admirable. I just hope he won't go all crazy and kidnap Max, Michael and Isabel, or find a way to force them to go back.

Van is more equiped to deal with Antar than Max. Although I think he can benefit from the human's part of our trio. Earth is not a paradise, but at least in some of our nations, we have freedom of speech, we have equality, we have freedom to choose what we want to do or be, democracy, those values could be transported into Antarian's society.

Oh, JOY! JOY! JOY!
I am so happy you are back into this story. It is the Best! You are the Best for continuing this story after so long. Your story telling talent is very much appreciated! I love the complexity of your stories. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I'm on the edge of my seat.

Pfff, what a charged chapter! That plan to escape was good, very good and I was tense reading it, hoping that everything would go according to plan. It looks like it did but I'm not singing victory too soon.

So Kal thinks that Zan is dead for good? He's going to be in a rude awakening then, since Max, Michael and Isabel are remembering and feeling like they were those past aliens. Of course, Kal's informations are outdated so I wonder what his take on on the situation will be, once he learns that?

Also, he thinks that Van will be king. I'm leaning more and more towards this ending. Although it's a bit tragic that Max, Michael and Isabel spent almost a decade to be prepared for anything, including going back and be leaders, all for nothing. Well, not nothing since they learned enough as if they were in college so they'll be able to live a normal life on Earth.

Still, I believe that being half-alien, they could give Van advices and also they could be like... diplomats? Represent Earth when there are summits with the other planets? Because I doubt that Antar will remain a secret aftter all that, right?

So good to see you back, good thing I registered to follow this story years ago. Although i'll probably go to RF so...

Poor Dave. I mean, I can see where he is coming from. But Daniel isn't like Dave. He is as intelligent as Dave and he wants to help him getting better but emotionally, the guy is completly different and not just because he is younger. He is emotional, volatile, a bomb waiting to go off, better not be around when that happens.

Dave is not MacKay, the ressemblance is superficial. Dave doesn't want to hurt or use people.

I don't even know if you even look at this story or its reviews anymore, as it has been 5 years since you last updated. I just found this story, and I can't get over how good it is. It is always disappointing and frustrating when authors stop in the middle of an awesome story and never come back to it. It is like a broken promise. Please, find the inspiration to come back and finish this one. There is a lot of us who would appreciate it. Thanks!

Hi there, it’s been ages since I read this story but I’ve seen you’ve just finished one of your other great stories and am really crossing my fingers that you will be inspired to finish this as well. Here’s hoping!

It’s been such a long time. I wonder if this will ever be updated? I’ll keep checking in from time to time. I hope all is well with the author.

Please finish this story!

i've been rereading this stories and i can't belive how good they are- still, like they are part of the cannon... made me miss the tv show, please if you can don't stop writing , it's really good and it makes me feel young hhhhh

RoswellianMisha, you are one great writer! I love you so much!
Please, please, pleeeease, a thousand more pleases to ask that you finish this awesome story! We just HAVE TO KNOW what happens. I HOPE you continue this tale and end it with the fine richness and depth that you have created so far. I know you must be working on things that pay real money now, but have mercy on us. This is too awsome to leave incomplete! Please, have mercy!

Oh no, is this it? There's no more? Regardless, it was fun while it lasted. I've enjoyed reading all of your books in this series this week. Now back to real life. . .

I have just discovered your stories by finding The Offer. I read straight through to chapter 17 of The Rebel. Even though it remains unfinished, I'm still glad I read it. Checking out your other stories as well.