No wonder you abandoned this. Wow... this is bad.

It was a really good chapter

I don't understand why you claim this OC is Itachi Uchiha when his whole personality is as different as can be.

Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon

you just copy pasted

I know it may be a long shot but I do hope for more of this.

so louise dreamed of sasuke and itachi dreamed of cattelaya.
should it not be other way around

not really excited about Osmond knowing about chakra before itachi came to FOZ

hope he dosent kill jim at the duel

You should really continue the story is really good but if you don’t want to that’s fine

Wtf so everyone can use chakra?

The story is amazing.. great job by the way and I really like when you pointed out that Itachi was corrupted by Naruto's mischievousness... I really laughed so hard because of that. I wish you could continue this story. If you ever have the time please do. It's awesome. a big thumbs up for you!

i won't lie, when i first read "the man who would sweep him off his feet and make all his troubles with magic just go away", i instantly thought "oh my god, "

nice fic, btw

Interesante actualiza pronto.

Man, why must all the interesting stories die far too soon? :(