Great story with lots of humor. Their witting conversations, challening the other were amazing. And what can I say about the flower fashion, the song under her window and the adbuction of the Lion! Her brothers did their best to help them and I liked how Erchirion was the first to see there was something between them. Her story with Lachol explained her behaviour and the hurt she kept hidden.

Thank you for a brilliant story.

You do write so beautifully! I had a few very important things to do today but instead, I ended up reading your story. I loved their first encounter, how they reacted to each other. You manage to express their chemistry so well. And I really enjoyed the whole part about how Lothíriel was unsure as whether she should trust him but ended up choosing to do so. It's so real, and it happens to so many women. I loved that moment when they were faced with Lachos and he stood up like an imposing powerful king (that he actually is) and later when she realized he had freed her. I also liked that last bit about how past Lothíriel had envisioned her future. After all, love is the unexpected. I liked your portrayal of all the Dol Amroth brood, I think we all agree that Amrothos HAS to be the silliest one. Your description of the customs and the landscape of Middle Earth was also on point. All in all I'm quite happy to have found your stories. With this one you quite literally made me smile, giggle and even brought tears to my eyes. Lovely piece! I hope to read more of your writing. Thank you for sharing.

Great story, light and fun

Just loved and adored this as they were so cute and fluffy!

Very sweet story.

I love the idea of Eomer terrifying Lachol. Glad Lothiriel felt closure then. Sweet idea re Eomer as the sun and Lothiriel as the moon. Fits in so many ways.

Loved the legends about Eomer. Lothiriel's insecurity is sad, but endearing.

I love the idea of testing his character. It does worry me that she would have been in a very bad spot if he had failed the test. Her story of heartbreak, was sad, believable and original.

I'm glad he was blunt about the issue of her reputation, etc. If she wasn't sure that she wanted to marry him then this was a bad idea. I also wonder how her father will react.

This is a serious abduction then. Interesting that she trusts him enough to be alone with him. Is she ruining her own reputation? Does she care?

A little embarrassing for Imrahil to explain to his guests, isn't it? I like how Amrothos helped her.

Poor Eomer. He keeps getting abducted!Eothain was wonderful.

Short & sweet. I'm surprised that her dad didn't ask her officially.

I loved the dialogue between Eothain and Eomer. The late night ride was wonderful.