Wow. I did not expect to read this all in one sitting.

I'm awe-struck. The amount of references, solutions to continuity and even just the plain PERSONALITY of these characters. You, good sire know how to write, to write well.

Good job! I'm excited for the next one.

Came for Caroline in a party hat, first chapter already has a good impression :D

This is terrifying and powerful (much like GLaDOS). I love that Doug had a plan - and of course he's probably the only one. He had to leave Chell again, but he's right, there's really no other way now.

Ohhhh, things are about to get worse...

Oh wow, GLaDOS almost seems heroic for locking down the facility now. Almost!

Ohhhh no, things went from bad to worse! I love how quickly Henry and Doug realize how helpless they really are here. Should've listened to Doug, Henry...

Hi, seems everyone is locked inside now while the Black mesa accident occurs

great as always, hope you have not abandoned this

Yikes, caught again... Not good for Chell.

CarolineDOS, on the other hand, is doing just fine! Deploy neurotoxin!

Aaah it’s happening! This update made my day btw, totally glued to my screen!

I remember reading this forever ago, and you just weave the story together. I love how you can tell a story, I can't wait for the next part.

I'm impressed by the detail that went into this chapter (and into the others, of course), you really painted a picture of the Aperture environment

Your imagery is always so stunning! I love it.

We're very hands-on! ...But don't touch anything. No actual hands on... anything.

Also, a great turret demonstration. Hm.

AND THEN THE BIGGEST DEMONSTRATION IS YET TO COME!

HENRY, WHY ARE YOU SO DUMB!?
"Oh, why would you be worried about neurotoxin? We've had PLENTY of experience with neurotoxin-based emergencies! Give her access to ALL of it, why are you WORRIED, Doug!?"

...And then discussing all this business in front of her? Another fantastic idea, she'll just file all that away for when it's useful.

Great chapter! ...Dumb scientists.

I love this so much, I can’t even express the joy I experience when this story updates. Henry and Doug and GLaDOS—their personalities and actions are all so perfect. I cannot wait to see what happens next, and I’ll always be patient for updates. We’re all happy for every little one we get c: