That could be pretty intressting.

This was so sweet! I love it so much :D nice work !

Oh I had so much fun reading the whole story it was just magnificent, perfect, divine, and beautiful one of the best stories I've read. Loved it please keep making more you guys are so good at it.

Wow I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. You did such a great job. Anyway I might not comment on the next or last chapter because I am running out of words to describe your and your cousin's work.

Wow that was amazing Misty really loves Ash, but I still don't know about Ash. I read something about Ash being bullied as a kid so it shocked me that you were more in detail with the same idea. I read it in a website which I think is called all about Ash Ketchum. This part was really great too.

Oh I just love this playful Ash, and the different sides of Ash and Misty. But I kind of had trouble understanding the story. This is still really good.

This story is so captivating I just can't stop reading it, I am glad Ash finally came to his senses and left Gary. I have never been paintballing but it sounds really exciting can't wait to try it out.

This is really good you made me like misty and ash even more. Can't wait to read the rest of the stories.

I read the first chapter forever ago and I was like let me finish reading this. IT WAS AWSOME! I liked how this journey went and it was reallywell written! Also, I challene you to write a story where all of Ash's travel companiones are in the story and Misty, Dawn, Serena and maybe May try to. Get Ash to fall for them. Either way I hope you write a new story soon! :)

Julie Togepi

2 things 1) HELLO FROM 14 YEARS IN THE FUTURE! 2) only Spruceton Spook can make a poke shipping fanfic out of a paintball war

Full of suspense and fun all loved the story all the way...

Oh my glob that was so beautifully written. Thank you so much for sharing this with us thank you. The kiss was the best part thank you.

So much awwww.
And one of the most believable kiss scenes to boot.

This was great, a good mix of being childish and adult. Though, I really wanted brock to spring up from his camoflauge after being knocked out from running into a tree and take them both out. Or have him watch the whole thing and tease them about it at the end

Aww this was so sweet! I almost feel bad for Gary though it seems that he only wanted to hang out with Ash but he was being a jerk! Ash and misty sure showed him! So cute love it !