| Reviews for Instrumental |
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Guest chapter 3 . 4/10/2015 Your not a loser! You don't suck at writing! I think your fine at it! Your perfect just the way you are! Stay positive sweetie! :) |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/22/2015 I can't wait for the re-write! Your work is awesome! Keep it up :) |
MelodiousMusic chapter 6 . 10/22/2014 Nuu, dont delete it! Make it like a now and then sort of story XD |
HiccupHaddockLover chapter 3 . 5/3/2014 NO NO NO! Me no like! This can go away! *sorry for my flames* |
Viola Snow chapter 6 . 4/9/2014 Well I didn't think any of the chapters were lame or anything I thought it was cool! And I kept reading it 'cause I loved it! Shame you can't finish this so I'll try to find the new one so good luck with that! Viola Out! |
MedicalMystry chapter 6 . 3/18/2014 ): |
mystery chapter 5 . 1/5/2014 really cool writing skills.. keep it up... |
DoublePaws chapter 5 . 11/11/2013 Wow! This is a great story! I like so can't wait for the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 Good job on the chapter but don't just leave us hanging. Your work has managed to impress me and that doesn't happen very often. I am a critic who looks at this site regularly just to see who the good writers are. Trust me you are near the top of that list. Try not to keep all of that raw writersness bottled up and show us what you can do. I look forward to your next update. |
Delph1762 chapter 5 . 9/5/2013 Oh yeah ! Premièrement, je suis française, j'espère que tu pourras traduire ;) Cela fait un moment que je lis ta fiction, mais là je suis OBLIGÉE de laisser une review ! C'est quoi cette fin ? Tu nous laisses là ? On ne sait pas ce qui se passe ! On ne sait pas ce qu'il s'est passé ! On ne sait pas ce qu'il se passera ! :O Sinon, I love it ! :D Jack et Hiccup sont si mignons ! *o* Même si pour l'instant, Hiccup ose rien du tout et que Jack se contrôle encore xp |
Iron eagle chapter 5 . 8/29/2013 Best of luck with highschool. Also great story and I hope to see more in the near future. |
RainIsMyFavouriteColour chapter 5 . 8/26/2013 Well, Jack and Hiccup are still cute, the fluffiness is adorable and Pitch is still an a-hole. I think that about sums this chapter up nicely. Ooh, but I also enjoyed the teasing on Astrid's part - hilarious! :D I do that to my friends too. They did warn me about what they would do once the situation is reversed. Maybe I shouldn't do that anymore lol |
shadow visor chapter 5 . 8/26/2013 mmmmm loved. please update soon! |
Aroski156 chapter 5 . 8/26/2013 OMG! I can't wait to see what happens! Please update as soon as possible! |
Honey beeez chapter 4 . 8/24/2013 You must be a Skillet fan... I LOVE YOU ALREADY Pitch is so freaking creepy, but I can understand... in a way... I guess... no not really, never mind. Really awesome, nothing else I can say, but awesome |