This was a very interesting story. I liked it!

This is truly very interesting to read; I hope to read something like this again soon

Love the story! though i still think something's missing

I don't quite understand some parts, however it was an over all great story!

... One thing throughout the time "Lelu" was pregnant went through my mind:
"WHAT THE HELL!?"
This is not a flame, I am simply saying, could you please add Mpreg as a warning?
I mean, the story is good, and I would've been fine with gender bending, but could you add clear warning?

Loved the story. Hope you make more of this stories.

nwwww :3