Literally am holding back tears...jeez! Absolutely loved this story, but this last chapter?! EPIC! GOD! Well done!

Oh my god damn... You killed me I dont thi nk I'm okay

Awww! Okay, I feel so so bad for Emma having to go through having a baby alone again but that last sentence was just beautiful. Thank you for a great read!

He will always choose her. Loved that!

Hahha, okay, I'm enjoying the fact that they are TL and yet playing around each other like teenagers xD Also yay for Emma saving him and sticking by him!

wow this literally left me in tears. i was looking for new stories to read and i am reading all your stories! This by far is my favoriteyour writing is amazing!

What a tremendous conclusion. I was certain there was no happy ending for Emma and baby but Hook was a fighter. And fighting for love is a lot better than fighting for revenge.

This was very different and very interesting. Emma and Hook were written very well, with the emotions and issues and self doubt ruling their lives. A simple misunderstanding that they could not overcome.

Cora and Regina were particularly cruel. Neal was annoying and insincere. He can have Tamara, we know how that ends! Thanks for writing, I enjoyed this story.

Love captain swan! The last paragraph had me in tears it was so cute.

Beatiful story! you really brought the tears to my eyes in the end :) Great job and don't stop writing! Ever!

It was a surprise to find something that long of yours! But it kept me preoccupied for a longer while back then when I was sick and bored to death - I'd read a great part of your oneshots and I couldn't get enough, it seemed as if they all ended too quickly (and I suppose, with a good read it's always like this) - so that being over 20,000 words made me very happy.
I scanned through this again to refresh my memory, and my eyes kept stumbling upon the word 'babe'. Ugh, I really hate that word! And Neal is a complete asshole here. Also, Cora is sickening here. Really, she's creepy here. As is Gold... Ew, a bunch of wierd characters...!
I think you showed here perfectly what a mess can become of a misunderstanding; how people who just need to sit down and talk grow to not making any sense. I was so frustrated with Killian sometimes, I wished he were real so I could reach out and smack him.
I am happy that it ended with them realizing their mistakes, with little Hope and him finding his way back to her!

WOW. I love it. I cry. I laught. Thanks so much.

you are literally the most underserving bitch that i have ever seen on Tumblr. you're needy and abusive and you give nothing. no one likes you - no one wants you. so how about you stop with this meaningless, character flawed, poor excuse of writing and just leave. Seriously "QUEEN MAGGIE" wahhh love me please - screw you and your self righteous attitude. I cannot stand you in the tag you make me sick because you think you're all that. people feed your ego and I hate you. i hope the dumb rp ends so people stop caring about you. your hook sucks and you make tricia look bad by her HAVING TO associate with you. Like seriously i feel bad that she puts up with you. you're awful and i hope you leave soon for good and ever ;)

Lol, thanks for making me cry...that was such a good story! :) By far, the best Captain Swan fiction I've read.

I'm loving your story so far, I'm a little sad that Emma said what she did about Hook to her mother. I also love how you've made Neal so incredibly annoying! :)

Awwwwwww, what a wonderful conclusion! Thanks for the happy ending!