This was beautifully done! It felt so real.

Aaaawwwww... So cute!
I love this couple

So if his team can do without Tony when he takes time off work to be with Ziva and his child, then why is he working such long hours?

I can hardly say how much I love this story; have to go back and read it every once in a while, it's just so beautiful! You have such a poetic way with your writing.

Planning on writing anything new for NCIS sometime soon?

awesome
beautifully written

Very good. If you were to write another one, I would so read it.

guao! THESE BEAUTIFUL AND VERY REAL SITUATIONS ... especially when both parents work and do not have support for caring for babies

Aww, so sweet. I bet your daughter loved it!

wow, this was awesome :') an amazing way to spend a revision break! :)

lovely, lovely, lovely! I sometimes read the first 2 sentences of babyfics and then go, "ick!" But when I saw this, I knew you would do something interesting with it. Very realistic, imo- babies do not necessarily make for fairytales, after all. And I loved all the conversation- you're so good at writing that with T & Z.

Looking forward, as always, to your next one! This was a great surprise.

Gosh, this was lovely! Thanks so much. :)

That was so beautiful. I really really loved it. I usually don't read very much about Tony and Ziva having children, not because I don't like the idea of it, but because people rarely do it right. But you were spot on. This was flawless. Your writing is pure magic. I can see all of it happening in my head as you write it. Absolutely perfect. Thank you for this.

Very well done! I was drawn in from the first few words and I enjoy how you made this real and gave it little fluff.

Good glimpse into the future!

Understanding, caring Tony...I like him a lot.

I'm generally not a big fan of babyfic, but this I really enjoyed. Thanks for writing!