In chapter 36, you say that "Exmuse je, coup manqué" means "Excuse me, Miss". I am French and I tell you that you made a mistake. The translation of "Excuse me, Miss" in french is "Excusez-moi, Mademoiselle". Otherwise, I love your fanfiction.

I think you should write a more fanfic tens like this one as it is really good so for, but I thought you should do it in the if you went to or like to write fanfic tens like this one at all, then you should do that then.

god I love the how to train your dragon reference

THE DAM SNACK BAR AT THE HOOVER DAM

Was the trolls stealing socks a nod/reference to How to Train Your Dragon? Or is it just me?

This is probably the best chapter in the whole story. The moment of truth when their true feelings are brought out into the open.

It should be number 1,234,593.

You said Brigit was 734 two chapters ago.

It should be "Petrov was too busy to pay attention to it; he had some grass that needed to be ingested-erm-investigated.".

I wish I knew how to pronounce the Gaelic and Welsh names/words.

Disney Rocks! And what do you mean about the mini-fairies not having any teeth to collect?

It should be six Guardians.

The plaid is a Scottish stereotype.

You do know that Ombric is Father Time, right?

Actually, it should be "North and I". Also, it should be "..risk freezing Jamie too.", "..utter shock", and "...saw it coming".