2019 soon and still waiting for an update. Happy hollidays

Pleas don't say that you have abandoned this story! I see that it's been a good long while since you last updated but I can hope, right? Anyway, I was jut thinking, does Kíli have any diagnose? Is that why he is so cold and doesn't understand feelings? Anyway, hope you'll get back to this story!

Wow!I think he will laugh when he saw bow:)This is what I you will uptate soon because it is good story and I want to read more:)
But good luck with writing!

Will Fili start a fight with another dwarf child and Kili laugh over that? Or will Fili play a prank on someone and get him to laugh (like dye Balin's beard pink or something)? Or will Bofur make a fool of himself? I WANT TO KNOW!

Continue? Please? I'm really curious
This story has kinda sucked me in, pretty please?

Please continue this is great! It's completely original and a brilliantly unique take on Kid!Kili. I can't wait to see what you do next :D

Beautiful and sad story. So different than the others. I like it very much, I wish you will continue and finish it soon :) I would like to read it compeletely :)

Sad, sad childl;

He stares, he wanders, he searches
For a way home
For an escape
From the depression that binds him

The sad child is not alone,
For a brother is by his side
Waiting, waiting
For that sad child
Following, following
With all his heart
Hoping, hoping
To one day see his brother smile

Uncle will not be pleased
When he catches wind of the rumours
Sad, sad child
Dead, soulless child
Walks among the living
A hollow shell

The sad child does not understand
Perhaps he never will
If only he could see
That there is feeling in the world

And love

I so cannot wait to see what brings Kili out of his shell!

For English not being your native language this is incredibly good. The idea is wonderful and the execution is all but flawless. My only advice would be to stay out of first person.

getting his bow? maybe that would make him happy... or show emotion

Poor Fili. Hmm...maybe have someone tickle him. Or smiles the first time he touches a bow, maybe in the marketplace with an encounter with a elf, who's silent like himself?

I reviewed for chap 3, but there was something else.

I think the prank should be like Fili trying to get Kili to swipe a dwarven hammer from thorin's forge, and then they drop it on his foot after he chases them out into the public, lol!

I;m gonna put this in detail to get my point across.

Fili drags Kili into pranking Thorin, who is really mad at first. The boys get scolded and Kili has no reaction. Then, Thorin starts chuckling, and so does, Fili, and then Kili does and they hug or something like that.

Btw, this happens in front of EVERYBODY, who are really shocked! lol!

I really like reading this story. It's different. Kili is usually rambunctious, silly, hyper, happy, and so on. It's great to see him written a different way and you do it very well.

As for what will make Kili laugh... I have no idea! But I cannot wait for it!

Loved it, so sad :( I think he's going to smile when he gets his first bow and learns how to shoot