OMGG! SOOOOOO GREAT! LOVED IT FROM BEGINNING TO END! WONDERFUL! WOULD READ AGAIN AND AGAIN! FANGIRL FEELS!

That was fun. I liked Tony's reaction, especially in yhe beginig, when he thought it was all a metaphor.

Dang it, you got my hopes up with that ending. But I absolutely loved this whole thing.
But, in the very end Loki said all "five" of them behaved. Who was the fifth? Tony?

This was a great fic, I absolutely loved it! Especially the mention of the never-ending cycle and how loki was always the one in the end. I loved how you gave him that hope that he wasn't destined for evilness and that even he could escape fate and be happy. It was heartwarming. Thanks for writing this!

Hahahahaah that was mean Thor XD

Great story, ,

:D

Awwwww that was sweet and cute and funny! Loved it

LMAO! Bad Thor! XD

Totally Loved this story... Loki's kids were greatly introduced not only to Tony but to us readers as well. Which makes me think here at the end... If Tony and Loki actually had a baby... Awwww... XD It would definitely be a genius having two overly smart parents.

Keep up the excellent work!

Great job!

Oh my god, Thor at the end! He got Tony good with that comment xD Love the story a ton!

SEQUEL?

that was cute. love.

OMG That Was Awesome! & Thor TOTALLY Got Tony At The End. That Cracked Me Up. XD

Really Great Story. X3

Oh my gosh, I may have been confused through some of it, but I LOVED THIS. It was funny and true to the characters and descriptive (with minor grammar errors but STILL) and full of amazingness!