This writer suffers from making characters opposing to the Dragonborn even more one dimensional then in the actual game

You start off nice. Then you derail from there with your game of Thrones imitation of killing off characters that you don't bother introducing. Then you take the emperor, who fought the fucking Thalmor, and make him some craven puppet to suit your own story.

Now I know this is fanfiction but for fuck's sake! The blatant "Everyone against Morgan is evil" is tiring real quickly. You have no empathy for anyone except Morgan. Whom also throws that away when she starts to take on monster like qualities, but then, she's a vampire so...

Then there's the whole debacle with the judicar that comes with... Selene wasn't it? Countess of Bruma? The one who's reading time feels like five minutes?

She comes with an army, an interesting plot idea! Thennnnnnn you ruin it through just sending them back withing three paragraphs...

I love your work and read this entire story but godDAMN you sometimes fail to grasp HOW to make the audience feel the emotions you want them to feel when you kill off this or that side character.

spend longer on building unique side characters' personalities and likableness more if you want us to feel somethign when you randomly list a bunch of names that die in the blades temple.

Herself is the exception but, spoiler alert, she's just the usual evil bitch persona that I could stand for exactly one chapter of the next story before growing bored already.

I'm not good with words but trust me when I said I read the whole thing and found it overal likable if sometimes cliche (what can you do?) or predictable.

one final thing; Morgan suffers wayyyyyyy more then she deserves plot related ways. I mean you make the main character suffer to gift them something in return, to make the reader say to themselves; "you deserve it Morgan!" but most of the times she gets nothing in return for all that suffering she goes through for sometimes NO REASON. (The cold harbor segment comes to mind)

At some point I'm just like; "you know what? I *want* Morgan to go mad and just go full genocide, it'll stop the irritating needless suffering that in the end has no point."

Words cannot describe how I felt when i finished reading this, but I will try anyway. It was amazing. This was one of (If not the) best sequels I ever read. The immersion with the character, everything was simply perfect. Keep up the good work!

Absolutely loved this story, maybe even more than the first time I read through it. You do so well at developing characters, and your plot is so much more enjoyable than the story in the actual game. Really hope you don't give up on writing this series; so many people love your writing.

as soon I I read "DO YOU?for the second time I knew immediately xD

LMAO Vuljotnaak is one of the weaker Dragons in the game xD

damn it didn't show up...

when you said "Pounded" did you mean what I think you did? like...8? If you can't tell what I am trying to make with those symbols then I can PM it to you in more detail...

awww Elisif has a crush! So cute!

I sent a review earlier but idk if it went through so I will say it again. I feel like I have read this before but I stopped before I got too far into it because I didn't understand some of the references they were making to Fire and Fangs. Funny how you can find your way back to a story through another one...

I've read this before... I know I have... I think I read the first chapter but stopped because I didn't understand what was happening and a few things the were referencing...

Pretty good, but I think you've rode the "she needs to let it out" thing far too long; there are limits to how long a naturally angry person can keep that all bottled up. It's not that I disagree with it as a plot device, but it's hard to believe that she hasn't reached that point yet after everything that's happened.

Also, the part where she spent a fortnight getting raped was pretty fucking uncool. Nearly stopped reading there.

Do it. Do it! Dooo eeeet, Morgan~! Amass the most beautiful and dangerous polycule in Tamriel!

wow what an amazing last few chapters. Sorry ive been away for a few months.

Having worked through all the chapters of both books in the past week, I have to say that your tales of Morgan Aurelius are fantastic, possibly the bestmost well-developed Skyrim fiction that I have yet read. Your characters are well-developed in ways that basically remain true to canon Lore. I admit that I never did make it through either the Dawnguard or Dragonborn DLCs, but your stories don't really need the reader to be that familiar.
I thought that linking the events in Skyrim to those of the Oblivion Crisis was an excellent choice. Having the Last Dragonborn be a descendant of the Hero of Kvatch was a nice touch; having the two heroes be family not just by blood, but by the Dark Brotherhood was also inspired, because it reinforced the importance of family in the story.
I can't wait to see what you do for a third book.