A great slash Fanfiction that is also a mystery!

Thanks for your amazing story.

very interesting Story and pairing

Amazing story! Great job. Enjoyed it immensely!

Thank you for such a wonderful read

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an amazing story. loved the plot

I loved this story! It was amazing!

Delightful story once again! I had a bit difficulty going trough that long long smut at the end but it as their first experience it was really needed

What in amazing story! So detailed, such a great plot, not OCC at all. I like that it was not rushed, great build up to the relationship. Thank you for sharing your story, it was fantastic and sexy! :)

Enjoyed this story.

Fans self vigorously. This was worth all the wait and the worry.

They are together at last.

The trap closes, and the Mystery Unspeakables have been caught in it, and not Snape.

I do like the flirting that 'Holden' indulges in, heh.

And holding 18 sick children as hostage-makes a person wonder just how many old DEs are *still* working for the Unspeakables.

I am a little surprised that any ward Eileen put up would hurt her son; but given that it might be based on purity of blood, maybe possible. But it's easier to get testimony against the others when the most dangerous one is out of action.

I do love how Harry can pull Severus out of the Cold Place, though; someone really needs to, and Harry does a very good job.

I also like seeing how Snape brews when he's experimenting (makes me wonder how he would do a clock reaction, and what kind of special surprise might be waiting for someone when Time's Up).

I love this chapter. It's nice that people like Snape's alter ego, too-in fact, people at St. Mungo's miss Snape himself as well. Once this is over, Snape doesn't always have to live in the shadows.

And Harry discovered the freeing aspect of his new alter ego, as well. This probably is not going to be the last time he uses Polyjuice.

I like the idea of the owl treat. Kisses are much better than bacon! I do feel sorry for Alissandra Miles, though; she was never allowed close enough to discover the bits that Harry learned the hard way. Sadly, she isn't Harry, doesn't have a bond, and looking even a little bit like Bella definitely is not going to help.

And the bit between Draco and Ron is priceless.

If relative amateurs are brewing this deadly poison, is there any hope that they have done themselves in during the process? Brewing can be dangerous for the brewer as well as the recipient, and we already know they're not good at cleaning up after themselves.

And the relationship progresses; Severus is happy at waking up with Harry in his bed, when normally he would be hexing an unexpected partner right and left.

Plus, Harry is good for Snape-someone has to make the man eat and sleep!