Gigatool ,Would you like me to review your story in exchange for a review on my story?
I will suggest three things that you might want to think about and you can do the same for me.
My story is at s/11909677/1/Minecraft-John-s-story

Once my computer was malfunctioning and I couldn't get onto Minecraft. I sat in my room and cried until my dad fixed it.

i see mine craft wherever i go, and sometimes see a mob and check again, but its something else. (i do believe in hero brine and i think he is trolling me…)

(Hero Brine wants to date me, after what hapend to Brianna Brine)

minecraft , the first time i heard about the name MINECRAFT i thout the game was that your character were like gta's character and you were supos to dig & dig & dig and then you were supos to combine everything

Hello, my name is NerdcraftMC and I have a problem. I always play Minecraft and I'm constantly getting grounded for not listening to my mum and continuing to play. Everywhere I go, I start to think I can see Usernames through walls and I freak out because I think I'm playing Hunger Games. It happens to me only in public places so it's really embarrassing. But I can control my problem! Just let me finish building this... *five years later*

wow this is funny

HEY GUYS CAN YOU CHECK OUT MYMINECRAFT STORY
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Once I was in my minecraft fantasy world when I heard a hiss coming from behind me, like
HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
And I turned around like "YAAAAAAH CREEPER!" and grabbed my official minecraft plush sword and swung it a maniac, ready for battle.

Turns out it was only my dad opening a can of coke...

Once I wrote on my arm and said " Fly," then tried to fly over my neighbors fence. I got sued because my head went through the fence and I had to go to hospital for a week. I must have made a mistake installing nodus. Gonna try again soon. Once I was let out of hospital I tryed water walking and banged my head while in the bath.

Once I punched my gravel pit over and over again trying to dig down and find diamonds. long story short, I broke my wrist. For some reason no blocks broke.

once i played MC on the PC and IPhone And IPad. it was hard to but it was fun :3

Whenever people ask me to play, I always say:sure!lets play minecraft!long story short, i was the only addict in my school, and...ill leave the rest up to you.

I found Minecraft through gooling stuff about Slenderman.
I am now a fan of Endermen.
I also started only looking into peoples eyes when feeling agressive and think of eye contact as rude.

one time *cough* 800 times *cough* i was at a friends house, they were watching a movie and had their back turned to me... here is the conversation we had,

"hey, imjaysong, come and watch this movie with me."
"i can see it from here (i was on a computer at a table while she was in the living-room and... admittedly facing in the opposite direction)"
"oh thats right, your probably on minecraft again" she said.
"heh, no im not! he-he..."
then she turns in time to see me hastily ex-ing off of minecraft and just rolled her eyes at me.
"i saw that imjaysong"
"..."

Ok so my friend has minecraft on her computer so when i go to visit her i go straight to the computer and completely ignore everyone... its like... WOW I'M SUCH A GREAT FRIEND!