This is pretty interesting so far, but this sounds more like a T rating story than a K- story because of those wolf like dogs eating or attacking people. And I find it interesting that you gave the villain dogs for companions instead of reptiles like the rest of the villains.

It makes me wonder how this evil general married and had children as well as a grandson, he is much worse that the other Rescuer villains (as well as that other story I read).

Anyway, this is pretty interesting, I hope Mike gets rescued by our heroes.

Boy, you were right! Joseph is 10 times as evil as Tito, & he certainly pulls out all the stops to show it! :O I do hope our beloved pint-sized heroes can get to Mike in time!

Excellent chapter, BTW! :D Keep up the good work! _

At last, we finally get to meet Aloha's Aunt Liane-& I can't wait to see how she'll aid & abet our heroes in their mission to rescue Mike! :D All in all, another splendid chapter! _ Keep up the good work! :D

P.S.: I also liked the use of the song "Somewhere Out There". :-) Very fitting! :D

Oooh, that Joseph is a real mean scoundrel-even worse than Madame Medusa, McLeach, & Tito Pakalini combined! :O I hope our heroes can get to Mike in time!

Oh, & BTW, the scenes with Aloha were very nicely-written. :D Those were my most-favorite parts of the chapter! _

Can't wait to see how the next chapter will turn out! :D Keep up the good work! :-)

Ohhh, this first chapter is excellent! :D Can't wait to find what happens next!