LOVE THIS

I know its been years but I know you will update this story and Ill be waiting.

Please continue to write Seal Your Fate since it's very good.
- S.S.

Please update, this is so awesome.

Good shit dude

And Maka sexually assaults Crona...didn't think I would be reading that today...so what is that black blood thingy in Maka anyway? And why would Maka just give it control? The ooc-ness is strong in this one

yet another manly tear from reading this.
it takes a lot to bring emotions out of me in stories, and this is a great fic.
keep it up.

YES, so much YES.
i even shed a manly tear at Crona and his shyness and awkwardness towards Maka.

Okay you need to finish this I need more mad maka and crona and so maka and crona and what ever other couple of crona and maka there is or whatever

Aww I love it! I hope you continue this xD

I absolutely love your crona x maka fanfics and this is no exception. You just can't find anyone who will write good CroMa fanfictions anywhere. Keep up the good work and continue to update plz and thanks!

Please, I know I am being annoying ,but please update this story!
I love Kid x Maka but there aren't many good ones of these,so please could you update?

Your writing is good. Very good, even. But turning characters into villains when they were the good guys in cannon is an easy way to lose people. There are other ways for a fanfic writer to remove a possible romantic rival than to make them evil. Think their personality's don't mesh but cannon has them as good friends, like Maka and Soul? They could easily become lovers because of how close they are, but if neither of them wanted, they'd never move beyond simple platonic love, that of good friends.
Theres no shame in making up a villain if you really need one, but lets be honest, Medusa died how many times only to turn up alive again? You can easily figure a reason for her to have survived if you want a truly irredeemable villain
If I'm completely misinterpreting how your using Soul, feel free to ignore the criticism in this review.

Good , Hot , Crazy , and Weird Loved it 1-10 I would say 9.

So many authors on this site appear unaware of how a chess match draws to a close. Then again, the same can be said for most people on this planet. Once checkmate has been declared, the match is finished...period. The king cannot be moved back to where it was, for to do so would place it in check. A player cannot place their king in check. It is an illegal move. If they do not not notice it, their opponent is obligated to notify them. In some very rare cases, when two opponents of close skill play, a draw will occur. This can be recognized by the pieces left on the board and the conclusion. Both kings will remain and one side will have most commonly a rook but sometimes a bishop. The two players will often play 'cat and mouse' for a while. It is morbidly amusing. When boredom sets in, the outnumbered player will tip their king over. An inexperienced player may count this as a loss/victory.
To those of us who have played this noble game our entire lives, however...
Nothing short of absolute domination counts as a win in competitive play. Chess is not about making the one across from you 'admit' defeat. It is about destroying them without them ever taking notice. If they have the time to admit that they have lost...you have failed.