I kinda wish this is what happened to Clara and the Doctor instead of what happened to them on the show.

Bronwin can't be an echo and this was written before the bells of Saint John... She's clara and the doctors kid in calling it

'Interesting parents' ha!

This is a fabulous story-I enjoyed it all! I usually rate out of 10 stars. By that scale, however, this is so intriguing, so well-written, so engaging, that it merits at least 25! I'm slowly making my way through a backlog of completed stories, so I'll get to the sequel as soon as I can.,

The doctor better not die anytime soon cause he used some hundred years up to save Clara

Omg soo sad

Wait wait wait, ok I like the whole R.E.D thing but that is not how Clara went with the Doctor, u were following the story brilliantly and I thought that Clara would die again sending doctor to now times meeting Clara again.
Oh we'll I'm still reading it.

I feel like I'm reading the back of a book, like I want to get into the story not bits and parts. Hope u do that

Brilliant, can't wait to read the second part!

Loves it:)

Who's River? But I like even though I don't know who River is.

OH, THIS IS JUST! WOW! I am in love with this, also. what River said, "run as fast as you can" then "remember me" hmm, i'm not spotting anything am i?

What can I say ? Pure brilliance, excellent writing, and a great read from start to finish :) !...The inclusion of (another) "impossible girl" - Bronwin was a great idea, which compliments the heartwarming relationship between The Doctor & Clara very well :) ! 110 percent AAA stuff !

OMG! i felt certain that he as going to change but he didn't so that's ok. Thank you

Please keep writting more your an awesome writter ! ;)

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S'il vous plaîtt pardonnez ma grammaire terrible. Même si je suis un étudiant francais, mon écriture est horrible ... je suis désolé